Of it's fine! and yeah this was a very quick color. I've got work tomorrow so when I come home I've got some serious work to do! I need to complete 3 submissions!

Hello Taicho. Since I did not want to clutter the CAP art thread, and I figured you would not read my edits, here is my conclusion on how to make your CAP look more electric:

The electric cloud currently is the exact some color as the skin of your cucumber. So, perhaps you could alter the colors slightly where the electric cloud is to really emphasize the electric typing? This is coming from someone who is a terrible artist, so please feel free to ignore my comments entirely :)

actually it seems like someone picked up the coloring for me so if I'm lucky enough to get it in on time I'll be submitting!

Hey taicho. I just thought I would stop by to beg you to enter a finalized version of your entry for the Cap 9 project, as I believe it fits DKs spread perfectly, and it is absolutely one of the top contenders. So, please reconsider your statement!