Hugen's a guy? ._. Oh god, I've made a terrible mistake

do not question the presence of boobs. hugen's very sensitive about his body u_u

Calm your boobs ._. I thought I did, but I accidentally exited out and it didn't save the first paragraph. The world isn't going to collapse.

No, you fixed none of it.

"D/P" should be "DPP", as per the Grammar Standards thread.

"it's" has an apostrophe, meaning "it is", rather than the intended possessive "its"; this is a basic rule of English.

"speed" and "attack" should be capitalised, as is standard in everything on Smogon.

Lastly, Aipom was never a surprise lead; on the contrary, it was a common and standard lead, and many opposing leads used Protect so as to avoid Fake Out breaking Focus Sashes.

Please take these into account; I really shouldn't have to tell you about these things. For the last one, that is something you should really know about if you're writing LC analyses.

I don't see what's wrong with it ._. I changed the D/P thing tho

EDIT: oh, I missed that part lol. but yeah I see nothing wrong with it other than that

Hey man, is there any particular reason why you ignored my advice on the Aipom analysis? I mean:

"I mean, this is the opening sentence and it has a basic grammatical error, two capitalisation errors, usage of D/P instead of DPP, and it was never a "surprise lead" really."

You put exactly the same sentence at the start of your rewrite and I'm kinda wondering how much attention you were paying.