oh, i haven't had the time to take a look at kyu-b yet but i'll message you later when i get the chance to gp it

So I see you're viewing the Kyu-B thread

Just wondering, how good was my edit? I feel like it might have been a little too much, and he took just about all of my suggestions, so that could've compounded the problem if it existed.

Thanks regardless of the answer

Heh, thanks. Sorry about that, it's a carryover from when I first had too many mistakes and c/p'd the BBcode, only for it to mess up. Which caused me to post on that one thread and you to answer, so yah.

when you use diff, don't c/p from the shown preview of the text. instead, scroll down to the text box under the heading BBCode: and paste that into your forum post, as this will avoid having those pesky little ¶ marks.

Thanks for that, it was pretty helpful

i recommend reading the following two articles:
http://www.smogon.com/smog/issue17/gp
http://www.smogon.com/smog/issue18/gp
especially the parts on preserving the author's writing style, but all would help.