... yes that was so embarrassing DDD:

it was... pretty bad lol >.>

gimme a read-through if you can? much appreciated!

yep - scored a darn terrible mark on it tooooooo. omicron's the only special one, lol!

you're welcome! do give me advice on analysis writing if you've got time :) I should have Hariyama done soon - i'll vm you with a link or something?

yeah, don't worry too much about missing out the odd capitalization or so - that is why each analysis goes through 2 gp checks, after all.

I completely hear you on the changing too much vs not changing enough issue. not saying this is necessarily the best way--in fact I've caught some flak for doing so haha--but what I do is change whatever sticks out to me as odd, and mark the more preferential ones as such, or give alternatives where I can. I think the test focuses on more objective changes though, so it might help to bear that in mind when doing it.

hey, i got to gliscor right after you did, made some minor edits and stamped your check - sorry for wallstalking lol, but you might wanna have a look

edit: oh you saw it, i'm slow gosh

I can only dream X: thanks! I'll need all the help I can get lol, so please feel free to suggest anything :)

done :)

sure thing, in a few hours :)

sure, I'll try giving that a shot sometime! thanks for your confidence :)

no, I haven't :( i don't think i'm a good enough player to do so, plus i can never manage to stick with one mon / team for any length of time. and now i'm tier-hopping all over the place too, LOL. i'll just stick with lurking around and helping better people :p