I was mainly reading it as a critic, so what I saw as redundancies may just have been you being thorough. Major props for writing that massive article and keeping it good throughout. I understand that you were in a rush, and I'm sorry if I seemed unimpressed. Overall, great work! We at TRC really appreciate your work!
Redundancies? I'd like to know what you mean. And the Black 2/White 2 article was meant to be really thorough so that I wouldn't have to do anything like it again. (That was seriously a long write for me, sorry for any typos.) I would have checked over more but I had to get out the issue tonight before my hiatus from tomorrow - Monday.
I actually did read the whole thing (except spoilers��). There are several redundancies, and a few typos (unavoidable- I can tell you what they were if you want) but overall, a good read!
Smaug I have the issue ready in the TMG group to be released check it out you're like the only TMG person online. Don't bother reading everything, just skim through the sections and tell me if it's okay so I can release it. http://www.smogon.com/forums/group.p...gmessage207157
You could just make two sections: before (BW1) and now (BW2). The before is all hard fact, while the new is speculation and what it checks/counters of the new stuff, how it responds to the new threats, etc. Speculation is fine, just have facts like Scizor checks x new Pokémon or something like that. Okay?
The fact of the matter is, no one knows what the future will hold. No matter how much we talk about it now, we can't know what will happen. I could just write about what it is/does now.
