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Here is my Nidoran-M analysis which I am finished with, but cannot post yet due to me having 5 analyses up already.

All feedback are welcome!




http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/nidoran-m

[OVERVIEW]
<p>Nidoran-M has very mediocre stats, but it is just enough to function well. Nidoran-M does not have great defenses so it will always be focusing on hitting the opponent as hard as possible before going down. Despite its unsatisfactory offensive stats, it can still make good use of attacking sets. Rivalry allows Nidoran-M to hit Male Pokemon quite hard. Overall, Nidoran-M is a Pokemon that an opponent should watch out for.</p>


[SET]
name: Special Mixed
move 1: Sludge Bomb
move 2: Sucker Punch
move 3: Thunderbolt
move 4: Ice Beam
item: Life Orb
ability: Rivalry
nature: Rash / Naïve
evs: 60 Atk / 196 SpA / 36 SpD / 196 Spe
ivs: 0 HP

[SET COMMENTS]
<p>Nidoran-M is a good wall breaker with lots of coverage, who is only held back by its lackluster stats. Sludge Bomb is a STAB move and is Nidoran-M’s main way of hurting opponents. Sucker Punch provides a powerful priority move to use against faster Pokemon. Thunderbolt and Ice Beam provide very good coverage,
hitting every Pokemon for neutral damage except for Magnemite.</p>

[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]
<p>Life Orb is used to allow Nidoran-M to dish out as much damage as possible, while only losing 1 HP per turn due to it only having 19 HP. Rivalry is the preferred ability because its power is further boosted against male Pokemon, though loses power against female Pokemon. Rash nature allows Nidoran-M to hit harder with its special attacks, but Naïve nature is also an option if one decides that Speed is more important.</p>


[SET]
name: Physical Attacker
move 1: Poison Jab
move 2: Sucker Punch
move 3: Double Kick
move 4: Return
item: Life Orb
ability: Rivalry
nature: Jolly
evs: 220 Atk / 36 Def / 36 SpD / 196 Spe
ivs: 0 HP

[SET COMMENTS]
<p>This set utilizes Nidoran-M’s highest stat to hurt the opponent. Poison Jab is for STAB, and is its strongest option against most foes. Sucker Punch is for picking off weakened Pokemon, and allows you to potentially beat Pokemon who normally outspeed Nidoran-M. Double Kick is Nidoran-M’s best option to hurt Steel-type Pokemon. Return is strong, and gives Nidoran-M more neutral coverage.</p>

[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]
<p>Like the previous set, Life Orb is used to boost Nidoran-M’s power, allowing it to deal more damage to opponents. Rivalry is used for the same reason as the previous set, to hurt Pokemon of the gender more. Nidoran-M sits at 15 Speed with a Jolly nature, outspeeding common threats that reach 14 Speed, allowing him to attack them before they can strike back. The EV spread gives Nidoran-M maximum Attack and maximum Speed, while allowing it to take hits from both sides of the spectrum a bit better.</p>

[OPTIONAL CHANGES]
<p>All of Nidoran-M’s moves that are worthy have already been mentioned, meaning there are not many other options Nidoran-M can use. A lead set with Toxic Spikes, Super Fang, Poison Jab and Counter could work, but Toxic Spikes is not very useful in Little Cup.</p>

[TEAM OPTIONS]
<p>Nidoran-M greatly benefits from the removal of Munchlax, because even Double Kick will only 3HKO factoring in Oran Berry. Therefore, Choice Scarf Mankey makes a great teammate to Nidoran-M, being able to OHKO Munchlax with Close Combat, or scout a switch with U-turn. Nidoran-M also appreciates entry hazards in the form of Stealth Rock, allowing Nidoran-M to have an easier time to deal with defensive Pokemon. Bronzor is a good choice for Stealth Rock, resisting or is immune to Nidoran-M’s weaknesses, as well as being able to set up dual screens if necessary. Gligar, a threat to Nidoran-M is also taken care of by Bronzor.</p>

[COUNTERS]
<p>Munchlax can easily come in on any attack, and OHKO Nidoran-M with Earthquake. Gligar can switch in on anything but Ice Beam and also OHKO with Earthquake. Furthermore, if Nidoran-M is running the physical set, Gligar can set up Swords Dance before wreaking havoc. Nidoran-M must beware of priority moves, because with its frail defenses, it is not very hard to pick off Nidoran-M if it has taken some prior damage. Finally, Bronzor can wall every set Nidoran-M can run, while setting up Stealth Rock in the process.</p>

Thanks mate, it racks my brain sometimes wondering whether I should post something in C&C, it's good to know that some experienced hands will be going over it.

Here's what I have so far with my Ubers Celebi


Uber Celebi

[OVERVIEW]

<p>Celebi may be outclassed greatly by faster Pokemon like Shaymin-s, However, Celebi has certain traits Shaymin-s does not, including increased bulk, the ability to setup, Baton Pass, and other notable advantages. Celebi has all-rounded stats meaning that the opponent needs to know it’s exact movepool before being able to counter it. Celebi has a diverse movepool, allowing it to perform many roles, albeit sweeping or supporting.</p>

[SET]
name: lead
move 1: Recover
move 2: Leaf Storm / Grass Knot
move 3: U-turn
move 4: Stealth Rock
item: Leftovers
ability: Natural Cure
nature: Calm
evs: 252 HP / 220 SpD / 36 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
<p> Celebi is a decent lead because of it’s ability to U-turn against Deoxys-A and Deoxys-S, breaking their focus sash and switching to a Choice Scarf or priority users to KO them, which limits them to one layer of entry hazards. It can also beat Kyogre and Groudon leads with Grass Knot, one advantage Celebi has over other leads is recover, so that it can regenerate it’s lost health and begin doing it’s job from a blank slate.

[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]
<p> Leaf Storm is the recommended option because Celebi will just U-turn, meaning that the Special attack drop is gone. Just to emphasize how bulky Celebi is, it can survive a Choice Speced Kyogre’s Ice Beam, and retaliate with Leaf Storm / U-turn


Name: Calm Mind
Move 1: Calm Mind
Move 2: Grass Knot
Move 3: Hidden Power Ice
Move 4: Recover
Item: Leftovers / Life Orb
Ability: Natural Cure
Nature: Timid
Evs: 36 HP / 252 SpA / 220 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
This set attempts to utilize Celebi’s bulk to setup Calm Minds and deal high amounts of damage to the opponent using Grass Knot, and Hidden Power Ice, therefore, the only type that resists both these attacks is steel types.

[ADDITONAL COMMENTS]
Since the only type that can resists both of Celebi’s attacks is Steel, you’ll need a teammate to counter them.


Specially Defensive
Name: Specially defensive
Move 1: U-turn / Grass Knot
Move 2: Thunder Wave
Move 3: Recover
Move 4: Perish Song
Evs: 252 HP / 220 SpD / 36 Spe
Nature: Careful

[SET COMMENTS]


Leech Seed

Dual Screen Support

Attacking Lead

Baton Pass

Support

Experienced hands = not me man.

First, you have to add much more to your Set comments and AC for both movesets. Its not enough yet. In Set comments, you need to explain each move thoroughly, and why you picked them. Good luck!

C&C is so badass, however, yes I know, I still have to fill in a few points, and I'm still rather confused, as this is my first analysis

The overview is actually not bad.

I think you should write a Special Life Orb set with Psychic, Hidden Power Fire, Power Gem and filler, perhaps another coverage move or Thunder Wave to cripple opponents.

Also, the word "Special" does not need to be capatalised. You only need it capatalised in this situation (for example):

Spoink reaches x Special Attack.
Spoink has many special attacks in his arsenal.

Hope I helped!

Anyways guys, UKF told me to reserve Mime Jr. last night, and after looking at its movepool and stats, I've found it to be viable in the metagame.

I have not finished the analysis yet. I am thinking about a lead set and BP set which is included in the analysis, but not sure if I should write it up. Suggestions are welcome. Thank you!

http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/mime_jr


[OVERVIEW]
<p>Mime Jr. is an underrated threat which when given the right support, can sweep right through the opponent’s team. Mime Jr. has just enough coverage to do its job, to punch holes in the opponent’s team, allowing for a late game sweeper to clean up. Mime Jr. is a Pokemon every team must beware of, and should not be underestimated of.</p>

[SET]
name: Nasty Plot
move 1: Nasty Plot
move 2: Psychic
move 3: Hidden Power Fighting
move 4: Encore / Substitute
item: Life Orb / Oran Berry
ability: Filter
nature: Timid
evs: 36 HP / 196 SpA / 36 SpD / 196 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
<p>Nasty Plot Mime Jr. is a force to be reckoned with, hitting 32 Special Attack after just one Nasty Plot, backed by an above average 16 Speed and Special Defense allows Mime Jr. to be very capable of sweeping through teams. Psychic is Mime Jr.’s main option of hurting opponents, gaining STAB and dealing huge amounts of damage to many Pokemon. Hidden Power Fighting complements Psychic well, hitting Pokemon who resist or are immune to Psychic for super effective damage, such as Steel type and Dark-type Pokemon. Encore allows Mime Jr. to set up a Nasty Plot easier. Mime Jr. can switch in to a set up move, proceed to Encore, then use Nasty Plot as the opponent is forced to switch out. Substitute is also a good option, scouting for switch-ins, while also helping against Pokemon who carry Sucker Punch such as Houndour and Stunky who would otherwise beat Mime Jr.</p>

[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]
<p>Life Orb further boosts the power of Mime Jr., and may prove helpful in many cases. However, Oran Berry is also a viable option to set up a Nasty Plot not worrying much about hard-hitting Pokemon. Filter is used to take super effective hits better. Timid nature allows Mime Jr. to hit 16 Speed, outspeeding many common threats, and is important if Mime Jr. is to sweep. The EV spread allows it to reach 19 HP, maintaining bulk while only taking 1 damage from Life Orb per turn. The Special Attack and Speed EVs allow Mime Jr. to hit a stat of 16, while the 36 EVs are dumped into Special Defense to allow Mime Jr. to take hits a bit better.</p>

[SET]
name: Choice Scarf
move 1: Hypnosis
move 2: Psychic
move 3: Hidden Power Fighting / Shadow Ball
move 4: Trick
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Filter
nature: Timid / Modest
evs: 36 HP / 196 SpA / 36 SpD / 196 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
<p>Choice Scarf Mime Jr. may not be able to sweep very well, but can perform tasks that the previous set could not. With a Choice Scarf equipped, Mime Jr. reaches 24 Speed, outspeeding all Pokemon who have 15 Speed and carry Choice Scarf. Hypnosis is a great move, rendering an opponent useless even though it is not very reliable. Psychic is there for a STAB move and is quite powerful. Hidden Power Fighting is the recommended option, having more coverage with Psychic. Shadow Ball can be used if you do not fear Dark-types and Steel-types, and prefer the ability to hit opposing Psychic-type Pokemon instead, Shadow Ball is a great option, getting neutral coverage on lots of Pokemon. The last move helps against walls that would usually wall it. Common Pokemon who switch in such as Bronzor and Munchlax are both crippled by Trick. Trick is also a good move to use if you are not sure what Pokemon will switch in to you, allowing you to act accordingly afterwards.</p>

[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]
<p>Though Mankey cannot switch in to Psychic, it can switch in to anything else without much harm, outspeed, and scout with U-turn. Due to Mime Jr. being able to use Hypnosis and Trick, counters may find themselves unable to counter it. Mime Jr. is not hard to counter once sleep clause is activated, and you know what move it is stuck on. Choice Scarf Pokemon love switching in on Mime Jr., then using U-turn to scout the switch-in.</p>

[SET]
name: Lead
move 1: Taunt
move 2: Encore
move 3: Psychic
move 4: Protect / Hypnosis
item: Focus Sash
ability: Filter
nature: Timid
evs: 36 HP / 196 SpA / 36 SpD / 196 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]

[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]

[SET]
name: Baton Pass
move 1: Hypnosis
move 2: Substitute
move 3: Nasty Plot / Calm Mind
move 4: Baton Pass
item: Oran Berry
ability: Filter
nature: Timid
evs: 196 HP / 76 Def / 36 SpD / 196 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]

[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]

[OPTIONAL CHANGES]
<p>A third attack option could be used on the Nasty Plot set over Encore or Substitute, though Mime Jr. already has lots of coverage with only the two moves. Thunderbolt is an option to hit Water- and Flying-type Pokemon harder, but does not have much use otherwise.</p>

[TEAM OPTIONS]

[COUNTERS]