i didn't reword it for the sake of it if that's what you were thinking. a lot of the sentences were VERY awkward and a lot of stock phrases were incohesively. for example, in the first sentence you say 'amoonguss is among one of the most used pokemon in nu for a reason' (possible paraphrase) then neglect to say what that reason is any on the following sentences. if you want to change stuff please go over it with me as i am the one who gp'd it. i am also official gp so this isn't a pick and choose what you like to change; discuss it with me.