tehy

I have to catch Fate and Oggy on IRC at the same time. Once I do, we'll discuss it and come to a conclusion between the three of us.

I'll let you know once we've discussed it, though. If there's a consistent problem we find with your checks, I'll give you tips on how to improve, too~

no problem i restored the post. thanks for the am check!

wut u gonna do with ur 800th post

EDIT: i mean 900th

Isn't using a site to correct grammar kind of lame? 3:

The spaces in between paragraphs isn't exactly a big deal, but it is a little annoying. Just hitting enter after every paragraph makes it a bit nicer for author's and checker's eyes to go over.

Also, what site are you using for GP checking?

One of the biggest issuse with your amchecks is the amount you're removing. There's always a degree to the author's style that really should be included, and unless an analysis is completely chock-filled with fluff (such as this one) there's little need in reducing the word count. I personally never remove too much and only focus on literal grammar mistakes. Whenever you make an edit in somebody's analysis, you have to ask yourself "Is there really something wrong with this section"? If not, I wouldn't think of making any kind of edit, as no writer wants to be told to rearrange their sentences one after another especially when there's not really an error. It also will discourage people from implementing checks. If anything, it's better to change too little than too much in an analysis, because there are always additional people that can find what you've missed, but nobody can bring back something deleted.

Tehy you need to get yourself an avatar

As of right now i have newest post in every single CnC fifth gen subforum.

(And none of it is pointless!!)

Although, some of it is just little additions and changes.

haha np. try not to post stuff that doesn't contribute to the thread!

You do also have 2 stamped checks by me, riolu and cinccino. Also, make sure not to post on top of other checks, unless OP made a post about putting the changes in. Some of the thing's I'm reminding you of are from older checks, but it's very important that you don't repeat most of the stuff woodchuck and I have been telling you about. That way you can show improvement.