I agree with your reply in the discussion; I suggest you make your comments in whatever color you want them to be in the actual warstory to ease my editing them in. (and do try to pick a color that is easy on the eyes :P)
EDIT: also agreeing on the intro section with looking at the teams in team preview, though I can't remember what order your team was in team preview (which might have mattered in my choice of lead)
alright, i'm currently adding in the sprites, if you want you can c/p the log (i have a copy of the raw log if you want it) and post your commentary in that group thread, at which point I can add it in.
lol most people don't call me woody but tbh it doesn't matter that much to me haha
here i need to invite you to a social group i made for working on this warstory
i've already been cleaning up the log and such, and it's easier working through group posts than through PM, and it's better on Smogon than on Word because I have a feeling the forum would screw up Word's formatting.
As for it taking a couple of days, that's perfectly fine! I'm happy you're willing to do this.
Also for stallwars we can just put them in hide tags and I think it would work out fine.