lol yeah, Chinese Canadian. Just a word of advice, don't overdo the rewordings, the GP team is mainly looking for your ability to spot grammar mistakes. In fact, I'm pretty sure more marks are given for grammar than rewording.
go apply for GP team, you have a decent shot at making it, just make sure to use checks that have been stamped as your example cheks, and don't choke on the exam. :)
I'm just pointing out mistakes in the writing. When mistakes are pointed out, you know what to avoid in future analyses. It's like the dentist (IIRC); get your teeth clean fully and brush well after.
Remember, GP checks are intended to fix mistakes. ;D
