Aaaah, waitno; you should put YOUR comments first as we're using your log xD But putting mine second is fine if you like. But if you do, when you're done, put [CODE] tags around it so that I can post it, please. ^^
Evening. :P It's 8 PM. Thanks so much for finishing what you needed ^^ I'll finish the log commentary and add percentages, props, slops, and my own introduction. If you could just do team sprites tomorrow, that'd be great (or any percentages I haven't done yet).
EDIT: Holy crap. I looked at your full edit, it's AMAZING. I'll post my comments for each turn (Ex: I'll say something like "Turn 1: [commentary]" and you can insert them into the post.), and I'll write my half of the introduction. You can put your team at the start of the battle too, since the story's two-sided.
Also, dammit D:< I was afraid to attack Zapdos with Borutorosu because I thought Zapdos had Lightningrod >_> I could have T-waved the thing, dammit...