Welcome to Smogon! Take a moment to read the Introduction to Smogon for a run-down on everything Smogon, and make sure you take some time to read the global rules.
Just an alert for CAP Sprites, you need to keep within 96x96 for the sprite size. Notably, your original is substantially over and your Kyogre inspired one is 102 pixels wide. Surprised nobody else picked up on it for ya, but there we go.