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sandshrewz
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sandshrewz

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    1. November Blue
      November Blue
      Huh? Copied what?

      Hey, I thought you were already on my friends list. Thank you for fixing this awful mistake. :P

      I've read through your Claydol check, and will begin implementing it in a sec. I'm only going to make some of the changes though, as a few were unnecessary, a few were erroneous, and the rest were pretty cool. Do you want in depth feedback?
    2. sirndpt
      sirndpt
      lol idkkk i don't really think writing up an analysis without ever having used the poke is at all a good thing, or at any rate it's not something i want to attempt :/
    3. November Blue
      November Blue
      I can't say for sure, but it would be in the dictionary because this use of since has become extremely commonplace. It's technically incorrect, and should be avoided in formal writing. (IMO)

      "Hm, I always though 'and' should be used with 'such as' since it's listing the possible examples,"

      From your last VM.

      Also, I changed it to Skarmory or Bronzong because the "and" makes it sound like they're countering Landorus simultaneously.

      "I had sardine, baked beans, dumplings, cauliflower, potato... The usual household fare :P *burp*"

      o_O *backs away slowly, reaching for gas mask*
    4. November Blue
      November Blue
      That one? Which one?

      Also, I'm going to lecture you about your use of "since." You're using it incorrectly.

      Since has chronological connotations, and should be used to cite points in time. For example, this is correct: "Since Dragonite got Hurricane, people started to use it on rain teams." It refers to the point in time where Dragonite got Hurricane ("since then")

      How was dinner? What did you have?
    5. Shame That
      Shame That
      yeah, I noticed that now xD be leaves nothing in his wake ._.
    6. sirndpt
      sirndpt
      i honestly dont know how to use mesprit LOL it gets nothing over mew / uxie / slowbro/king D:
    7. November Blue
      November Blue
      I haven't had a look yet (I'm about to.)

      But I will say this: I had a look at the Substitute + Smack Down Landorus thread, and your GP check was the best of all three, even better than NWO's (that particular check wasn't his best work).

      I'll tell you what. Apply for the GP team now, you're ready. You have to take into account the waiting time, which you can use to refine your skills. Good luck!
    8. NMx13
      NMx13
      O hai Shrewz, Shame ;P
    9. Shame That
      Shame That
      Well, its already written up, it would be a shame to waste it... I'll ask him though.

      Im on the look out for something to take over and write actually; where can I find them?
    10. November Blue
      November Blue
      Mmmkay, sandz it is! I'm a boy.
    11. sirndpt
      sirndpt
      lol sure! i'll get sun out of the way first though
    12. Shame That
      Shame That
      woah @.@ you're getting friendly with pretty much all of the GP members! xD
    13. Shame That
      Shame That
      Yay! :D Grats man! I'm not sure about re-applying though.. When I get a stamp I probably will
    14. NixHex
      NixHex
      cool man. i'm really excited about the plethora of new grammar checkers especially with all the vgc analyses and new sets springing up. all help is appreciated.
    15. B-Zard
      B-Zard
      I know. Good luck with the tournament. Sadly there aren't a lot of people online at the past gen forum :(
    16. November Blue
      November Blue
      It's French, run it through babelfish.

      Claydol analysis? *blush* heh, you flatter me.

      Anyway, I'm tired! which means bedtime. See ya tomorrow sandy!
    17. November Blue
      November Blue
      Bon, mon ami.
    18. November Blue
      November Blue
      Right now, I prefer GP checking because I'm better at it, but I love writing analyses as well. I'm fairly good at writing, but there's a lot of room for improvement, and I enjoy "developing."

      I can't wait to see my Claydol analysis onsite! ^_^
    19. NMx13
      NMx13
      VS'd Umbreeon! I won. Lols elec came just :p
    20. November Blue
      November Blue
      Just RU Claydol at the moment. I'm currently writing up Amoonguss, so watch out for that.
    21. November Blue
      November Blue
      Congrats on your first stamp!
    22. sirndpt
      sirndpt
      lol i'm burned out x: and working on my sun article, haha.
    23. NMx13
      NMx13
      hah typos xD
    24. NMx13
      NMx13
      Oh you will get job?
    25. NMx13
      NMx13
      lols nope.. Havent seen Umbry. Pizza was ytd online? idk, it was late if was..
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    Gender:
    Male
    Birthday:
    Jan 9, 1995 (Age: 21)
    Location:
    ASIA
    Favorite Pokémon:
    Venusaur!!
    My Characteristic:
    Highly curious
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