(Archive) Small Objective Changes Thread

[Junk]

http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/arcanine#Physical_Life_Orb

In the abilities for that set, Flash Fire / Intimidate is one link. It should be separated into two links. Since it links to http://www.smogon.com/dp/abilities/flash_fire__intimidate, it's obviously a broken link.

 

[supermarth64]

http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/arcanine#Physical_Life_Orb

In the abilities for that set, Flash Fire / Intimidate is one link. It should be separated into two links. Since it links to http://www.smogon.com/dp/abilities/flash_fire__intimidate, it's obviously a broken link.

I was actually on that page earlier today and made a mental note to fix it. Thanks for reminding me.

 

[TheMusicMan]

http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/abra

The goal of this set is to use Abra's awesome power, while attempting to get rid of its glaring weakness to priority. (First sentence in the SubAbra set, not entirely sure if the comma is necessary there, it looks awkward to me)

One of the best would be Munchlax, who isable to shake off a couple of Abra's hits and kill it with any of its attacks. (Second sentence in the Counters section)

 

[En-Cu-Kou]

In Shell Bell's description: http://www.smogon.com/dp/items/shell_bell: (…Leftovers provides recovery of 1/6 of the holder's total HP every turn…)
Leftovers heals 1/16 max HP, not 1/6

 

[supermarth64]

In Shell Bell's description: http://www.smogon.com/dp/items/shell_bell: (…Leftovers provides recovery of 1/6 of the holder's total HP every turn…)
Leftovers heals 1/16 max HP, not 1/6

Done, thanks.

 

[Oglemi]

http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/abra

Counters section, first paragraph, fourth sentence:

However, the best way to stop the SuAbbra set from doing significant damage to your team is simply to not let it use Substitute.

I'm not sure whether that is indeed correct or if it should say SubAbra or something.

 

[Oglemi]

http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/abra

Counters section, second paragraph, second sentence:

Even better counters would be Choice Scarf Pokémon that can KO Abra without letting it get one of the screens up

I think the word screen needs an s at the end of it.

 

[Oglemi]

http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/abra

Counters section (again), last paragraph, third sentence.

However,(space)with good prediction the Choice set can be very difficult to beat.

There needs to be a space between the comma and the word "with".

 

[Oglemi]

http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/clamperl

LC Resttalk set, third paragraph, last sentence:

It is also a good backup in case Toxic Spikes are never set up or arespun away.

There just needs to be a space between are and spun.

 

[Oglemi]

http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/clamperl

Little Cup Team Options section, second paragraph, first sentence:

Even though Clamperl's defenses are very high, there are some Pokemon whomClamperl cannot hope to wall.

There needs to be a space between whom and Clamperl.

 

[Oglemi]

http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/clamperl

Little Cup Team Options section, third paragraph, third sentence:

In addition, Toxic Spikes mean that Pokemon cannot burnMunchlax to reduce its Attack power

There needs to be a space between burn and Munchlax.

 

[Oglemi]

http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/clamperl

Little Cup Team Options section, third paragraph, fifth sentence:

Machop can be handled the same way, but beware of the Guts boost thatMachop receives from Poison

There needs to be a space between that and Machop.

 

[Oglemi]

http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/clamperl

Little Cup Counters section, fourth sentence:

Set-up Pokemon, such as Dratini and Mantyke, can make life miserable for Clamperl if it does not have the proper move with whichto hit them.

There needs to be a space between which and to.

 

[GMLW]

http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/arcanine

Physical Life Orb set, last paragraph, second sentence.

If Arcanine isn't carryingThunder Fang, it will have trouble dealing with Moltres, so packing a bulky Water-type to switch in is recommended.

Needs a space between carrying and Thunder Fang.

 

[Oglemi]

http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/marowak

In MY Marowak analysis, the fourth paragraph of the SubWak set is a little funky. One of the <p> has a weird space, so its a little weird. Here:

< p>Stone Edge can be used in the

 

[Rising_Dusk]

DZ took care of the Arcanine issue, I have fixed Marowak and the Clamperl issues.

 

[Banedon]

The Steelix analysis page (http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/steelix):

Steelix's Physical Defense is already impressive, so any defensive set will want to maximize its HP and Special Defense and use a Special Defense boosting nature to take advantage of it. You need as much Special Defense as possible to survive unboosted special attacks without a type-resist Berry; if you want your Steelix to pose a threat offensively, switch the HP EVs with Attack EVs, but still keep the +Special Defense nature. Without it, you're helpless to any special attack you don't resist, which is why the Choice Band set does not even bother.

Steelix doesn't have a Choice Band set (not anymore, anyway).

 

[ungulateman]

Dragon Dance Crawdaunt has Crawdaunt spelled "Craudaunt".

 

[Nix_Hex]

http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/blaziken
Set: Mixed (Priority) Attacker

Fire Blast will be your main attack, and Hidden Power is for the common Water-type switch-ins. Both Hidden Powers get the important 2HKOs on bulky Water-types such Slowbro who always falls to a Fire Blast followed by Hidden Power as long as Stealth Rock is in play.

This should be such as.

 

[Rising_Dusk]

I have fixed the following:

http://www.smogon.com/forums/showpost.php?p=2968486&postcount=45
http://www.smogon.com/forums/showpost.php?p=2968494&postcount=46
http://www.smogon.com/forums/showpost.php?p=2968505&postcount=47
http://www.smogon.com/forums/showpost.php?p=2968524&postcount=48
http://www.smogon.com/forums/showpost.php?p=2968533&postcount=49
http://www.smogon.com/forums/showpost.php?p=2968538&postcount=50
http://www.smogon.com/forums/showpost.php?p=2969995&postcount=56
http://www.smogon.com/forums/showpost.php?p=2970803&postcount=58
http://www.smogon.com/forums/showpost.php?p=2970354&postcount=57

 

[symphonyx64]

http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/alakazam

On the set "Aggressive Lead":

Signal Beam is essential on this set in order to hit Uxie and Spiritomb for super effective damage.

Spiritomb doesn't have any weaknesses.

 

[evilGod]

http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/metagross

On the mixed attacker analysis, the EV's for speed are listed as 4 more than possible, giving a total of 512. The analysis refers to a speed of 209, which is the speed with the correct speed EV's of 132.

 

[Junk]

http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/magcargo

I noticed that Team Options, Counters, etc., are in caps. This doesn't seem to be the style that is featured in other analyses, so I believe it should be changed.

 

[supermarth64]

http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/magcargo

I noticed that Team Options, Counters, etc., are in caps. This doesn't seem to be the style that is featured in other analyses, so I believe it should be changed.

Fixed, thanks.

 

[dannydamagichobo]

Arcanine

http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/arcanine#Physical_Life_Orb

On the third sentence of the analysis of the Physical Life Orb set, "Thunder Fang and Hidden Power Grass provide decent coverage options for Arcanine, and while Thunder Fang seems like the better choice due to Arcanine's superior Attack,most of Hidden Power Grass's targets have a 4x weakness and are thus OHKOed."

There must be a space in between the comma and most. THERE JUST MUST!

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http://www.smogon.com/ingame/misc/gsc_tips

In the Cloning Glitch, "Be very cautious whenusing this glitch, as it may result in the loss of saved data."

There must be a space in between when and using. THERE JUST MUST.