Confusion and Trick don't go together(OU Warstory)

Hi, this is my second warstory. I know this battle isn't tense or anything, but it was close. I am not experienced in anyway. I realize this and know that this warstory is probably lacking. I know that the text has no color and I don't know how to add them on. And someone needs to make a Warmachine for Pokemon Lab.
My team:
Azelf
Flygon
Heatran
Suicune
Jirachi
Breloom
Tyranitar's team: (the opponent)
Uxie
Flygon
Kingdra
Heatran
Starmie
Breloom
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Announcer: It is time for the finals of the OU Shoddy Cup( this is a fictional tournament). Our competitors are manav95 and Tyranitar. Both are excellent trainers and both deserve to win. Only one can win,though, so both trainers must be cautious. They are now using new teams so you won't know what these 2 have up their sleeves. OK,Let's begin.
manav95: Come on Tyranitar. I am going to beat you. You better be prepared.
Tyranitar: We all know that you just won because of a fluke. My Pokemon are trained to the max. My knowledge of important damage calculations and strategy is unmatched. I have beaten many others in this Cup without breaking a sweat and 6-0ed most of them. You have struggled. What makes you think you can beat me?
manav95: I have a good knowledge of all that too. Don't underestimate me or you will regret it.
Tyranitar: Bring it on. I see no reason to underestimate you because this is the finals. En garde.
manav95 sent out Azelf (lvl 100 Azelf)!
Tyranitar sent out Uxie (lvl 100 Uxie)!
OK, so Tyranitar sends out Uxie against my Banded Azelf. OK stay focused. Uxie is most likely either a TrickScarfer or a Dual Screener. If it is a TrickScarfer, only Azelf or my Scarfed Flygon would mind being Scarfed. If it is a Dual Screener, then I will have to face an HO team and will struggle to do anything for 10 turns. Either way, TrickScarfer is more common and Flygon is the best switchin for that. I decide to play it safe and send in Flygon.
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Begin turn #1
manav95 withdrew Azelf!
manav95 sent out Flygon (lvl 100 Flygon ?)!
Uxie used Trick!
Uxie obtained Choice Scarf!
Flygon obtained Choice Scarf!
Tyranitar is intent on shutting me down. I don't know what he is going to do next. I figure he may switch to a U-Turn resist because Flygon is faster than Uxie. I pick U-Turn to scout his switchin.
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Begin turn #2
Flygon used U-turn!
It's super effective!
Uxie lost 12/48 (25%) of its health!
manav95 withdrew Flygon!
manav95 sent out Azelf (lvl 100 Azelf)!
Flygon went back to manav95!
Uxie used Trick!
Uxie obtained Choice Band!
Azelf obtained Choice Scarf!
Curses. After seeing Uxie still in, I knew he planned on Tricking me and so I switched in Azelf to take the Trick. I plan on U-Turning to scout his switchin and see his reaction.
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Begin turn #3
Tyranitar withdrew Uxie!
Tyranitar sent out Heatran (lvl 100 Heatran ?)!
Azelf used U-turn!
It's not very effective...
Heatran lost 3/48 (6%) of its health!
manav95 withdrew Azelf!
manav95 sent out Heatran (lvl 100 Heatran ?)!
Azelf went back to manav95!
Heatran's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Heatran regained 3/48 (6%) of its health!
He brings in Heatran. I swear that thing is everywhere. But not just any Heatran, it has Leftovers. That tells me it must be a bulky one. I think Tyranitar's team could be a balanced one with the Uxie lead and all. This one could be either a TormentTran to be a pain in the ass or a generic bulky set to sweep. I bring in ShucaTran to deal with this and get some rocks up. I know Heatran hasn't invested much in Speed, so my Heatran should outspeed it. Rocks away.
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Begin turn #4
Tyranitar withdrew Heatran!
Tyranitar sent out Starmie (lvl 100 Starmie)!
Heatran used Stealth Rock!
Pointed stones float in the air around your foe's team!
I did not want to see that. Starmie is a giant ass to my team. It hits 4 of my members super-effectively and I don't want to risk getting Flygon or Azelf or anyone unnecessarily crippled. I send in my SubCM Jirachi to deal with the pest with TBolt.
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Begin turn #5
manav95 withdrew Heatran!
manav95 sent out Jirachi (lvl 100 Jirachi)!
Starmie used Surf!
Jirachi lost 183/404 (45%) of its health!
Starmie lost 5/48 (10%) of its health!
Jirachi's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Jirachi regained 25/404 (6%) of its health!
At this point, I realize Jirachi is going to die. It will die to 2 surfs and TBolt will 2KHO that star. Starmie would be in range to be KOed by Flygon and possibly Stealth Rock. I decide to TBolt.
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Begin turn #6
Starmie used Surf!
Jirachi lost 195/404 (48%) of its health!
Starmie lost 5/48 (10%) of its health!
Jirachi used Thunderbolt!
It's super effective!
Starmie lost 33/48 (68%) of its health!
Starmie is paralysed! It may be unable to move!
Jirachi's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Jirachi regained 25/404 (6%) of its health!
Wow parahax. I have a tough decision to make. Starmie is now useless because the rocks will KO it if it switches out and tries to come back in and Rachi will murder it with TBolt. I decide to play it safe and TBolt because he may try to bring in Heatran to counter it.
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Begin turn #7
Tyranitar withdrew Starmie!
Tyranitar sent out Flygon (lvl 100 Flygon ?)!
Pointed stones dug into Flygon!
Flygon lost 3/48 (6%) of its health!
Jirachi used Thunderbolt!
It doesn't affect Flygon...
Jirachi's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Jirachi regained 25/404 (6%) of its health!
Wow, he decides to save it as death fodder. Unfortunately, he brings in a Flygon and threatens to EQ. I have 3 options. Switch to Tran, Flygon, or Breloom. Tran is risky because he may try to EQ me. Flygon is also risky because it gets walled by so many things and I am afraid of any Spikers. Breloom is the best because he resists EQ and U-Turn would shave a quarter off. It can also lure Tran in and I could set up with Suicune on it.
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Begin turn #8
manav95 withdrew Jirachi!
manav95 sent out Breloom (lvl 100 Breloom ?)!
Flygon used U-turn!
Breloom lost 82/321 (25%) of its health!
Tyranitar withdrew Flygon!
Tyranitar sent out Starmie (lvl 100 Starmie)!
Pointed stones dug into Starmie!
Starmie lost 6/48 (12%) of its health!
Starmie fainted!
Flygon went back to Tyranitar!
Breloom was badly poisoned!
Tyranitar sent out Heatran (lvl 100 Heatran ?)!
Pointed stones dug into Heatran!
Heatran lost 6/48 (12%) of its health!
Well Starmie is dead now and Heatran is against Breloom. I know it is still faster than Breloom and I will have to switch out. I decide to switch out to Heatran because I realize Suicune might be better off coming in later. I send in Heatran to deal with this fool.
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Begin turn #9
manav95 withdrew Breloom!
manav95 sent out Heatran (lvl 100 Heatran ?)!
Heatran used Substitute!
Heatran lost 12/48 (25%) of its health!
Heatran made a substitute!
Heatran's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Heatran regained 3/48 (6%) of its health!
He uses a Sub, so I’m guessing it is a Torment Tran. It won’t do much regardless because it only knows Lava Plume. I decide to Earth Power because I need to scout his switchin. I feel secure about this.
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Begin turn #10
Heatran used Earth Power!
Heatran's Shuca Berry weakened Earth Power's power!
It's super effective!
Heatran lost 188/323 (58%) of its health!
Heatran used Earth Power!
It's super effective!
Heatran's substitute took damage for it!
Heatran's substitute faded!
Heatran's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Heatran regained 3/48 (6%) of its health!
WTF What is this set? Seriously, Heatran could be a physical attacker if it can do this too. Now I am mad. I decide to switch to Flygon to take the Earth Power or Fire move that comes up. It can then force Heatran to switch out and give me time to come back into the game.
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Begin turn #11
manav95 withdrew Heatran!
manav95 sent out Flygon (lvl 100 Flygon ?)!
Heatran used Earth Power!
It doesn't affect Flygon...
Heatran's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Heatran regained 3/48 (6%) of its health!
OK that worked well. Heatran will probably switch out because I could eradicate him here and now. I U-Turn to avoid any ground immune pokes from setting up. Man am I having to think here.
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Begin turn #12
Flygon used U-turn!
It's not very effective...
Heatran lost 3/48 (6%) of its health!
manav95 withdrew Flygon!
manav95 sent out Jirachi (lvl 100 Jirachi)!
Flygon went back to manav95!
Heatran used Substitute!
Heatran lost 12/48 (25%) of its health!
Heatran made a substitute!
Jirachi's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Jirachi regained 25/404 (6%) of its health!
Heatran's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Heatran regained 3/48 (6%) of its health!
Lol. He predicted my U-Turn and sets up a Sub. This sucks. I send in Jirachi to die and hopefully break the sub before mopping up with my Flygon. Jirachi isn't going to last much longer anyway and I don't want Suicune Exploded on or Roared out to something Heatran can sub up on.
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Begin turn #13
Jirachi used Thunderbolt!
Heatran's substitute took damage for it!
Heatran's substitute faded!
Heatran used Flamethrower!
A critical hit!
It's super effective!
Jirachi lost 126/404 (31%) of its health!
Jirachi fainted!
Heatran's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Heatran regained 3/48 (6%) of its health!
manav95 sent out Flygon (lvl 100 Flygon ?)!
Yay useless crit. Heatran is now in the open and Flygon is prepped to murder him. I decide to EQ here since Uxie can be dealt with by Azelf. I just stay in to avoid the previous U-Turn debacle and maybe catch him off guard this time. The Heatran is annoying anyway and I don't want to deal with him again.
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Begin turn #14
Tyranitar withdrew Heatran!
Tyranitar sent out Uxie (lvl 100 Uxie)!
Pointed stones dug into Uxie!
Uxie lost 6/48 (12%) of its health!
Flygon used Earthquake!
It doesn't affect Uxie...
Uxie comes back in. Why did I think he was trying to overpredict again? I see a possible Trick coming in again. I believe he wants his Scarf back to Trick it to something without relying on Uxie's mediocre speed. I bring in Azelf because he wants his Band back to sweep this guy.
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Begin turn #15
manav95 withdrew Flygon!
manav95 sent out Azelf (lvl 100 Azelf)!
Uxie used U-turn!
It's super effective!
Azelf lost 168/291 (57%) of its health!
Tyranitar withdrew Uxie!
Tyranitar sent out Heatran (lvl 100 Heatran ?)!
Pointed stones dug into Heatran!
Heatran lost 6/48 (12%) of its health!
Uxie went back to Tyranitar!
Heatran's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Heatran regained 3/48 (6%) of its health!
Oh wow. Uxie U-turns straight into the lava dome again. I decide to stay in and Zen Headbutt to see if it can break the sub. Yeah I know what I am doing. I just don't want to risk some hax screwing up my team members or a status move.
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Begin turn #16
Azelf used Zen Headbutt!
It's not very effective...
Heatran lost 9/48 (18%) of its health!
Heatran used Substitute!
Heatran lost 12/48 (25%) of its health!
Heatran made a substitute!
Heatran's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Heatran regained 3/48 (6%) of its health!
Crap,only 18%. Azelf needs the Band back. At this point, I decide to bring in Suicune because I ran out of excuses to not bring it in. Maybe I should have done that before instead of using the overgrown dragonfly. This Heatran needs to go.
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Begin turn #17
manav95 withdrew Azelf!
manav95 sent out Suicune (lvl 100 Suicune)!
Suicune is exerting its Pressure!
Heatran used Flamethrower!
It's not very effective...
Suicune lost 78/342 (22%) of its health!
Suicune's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Suicune regained 21/342 (6%) of its health!
Heatran's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Heatran regained 3/48 (6%) of its health!
Flamethrower does some to Suicune but whatever. My Suicune is the offensive HP Electric one. He should outspeed and hopefully KO it quick. This Heatran is a pain in the ass anyway. Hydro Pump away.
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Begin turn #18
Suicune used Hydro Pump!
It's super effective!
Heatran's substitute took damage for it!
Heatran's substitute faded!
Heatran used Toxic!
Suicune was badly poisoned!
Suicune's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Suicune regained 21/342 (6%) of its health!
Suicune is hurt by poison!
Suicune lost 21/342 (6%) of its health!
Heatran's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Heatran regained 3/48 (6%) of its health!
Crap, it had Toxic. For so long, I kept that at bay and now my Suicune is poisoned. This is bad. I decide to CM expecting a grass type to switch in and hopefully dispatch one.
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Begin turn #19
Tyranitar withdrew Heatran!
Tyranitar sent out Uxie (lvl 100 Uxie)!
Pointed stones dug into Uxie!
Uxie lost 6/48 (12%) of its health!
Suicune used Calm Mind!
Suicune's special attack was raised!
Suicune's special defence was raised!
Suicune's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Suicune regained 21/342 (6%) of its health!
Suicune is hurt by poison!
Suicune lost 42/342 (12%) of its health!
OK no grass type out yet tells me he has none or he fears an Ice Beam. I am uncertain whether Suicune outspeeds Uxie or not but I try to play it safe and switch in Flygon. This is because he may U-Turn out and Azelf would die and even if he Tricks Flygon wouldn't be as pissed off as my other team members. Besides a Band might help him to perform a necessary kill later on. I didn't realize that this decision wouldn't have been that bad for me in the long run.
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Begin turn #20
manav95 withdrew Suicune!
manav95 sent out Flygon (lvl 100 Flygon ?)!
Uxie used Trick!
Uxie obtained Choice Scarf!
Flygon obtained Choice Band!
OK just as I expected. Still I am glad that Azelf isn't dead yet and the Scarf could help out against any dragons.(wink) I predict him sending in Heatran to block U-Turn and so I decide to EQ. Hey I get to overpredict too you know.
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Begin turn #21
Tyranitar withdrew Uxie!
Tyranitar sent out Heatran (lvl 100 Heatran ?)!
Pointed stones dug into Heatran!
Heatran lost 6/48 (12%) of its health!
Flygon used Earthquake!
It's super effective!
Heatran lost 9/48 (18%) of its health!
Heatran fainted!
Tyranitar sent out Breloom (lvl 100 Breloom ?)!
Pointed stones dug into Breloom!
Breloom lost 3/48 (6%) of its health!
Yeah Tran is dead now. But unfortunately Breloom is in and walls me. I decide to switch in Suicune because it is poisoned anyway and Azelf might hold out longer against any sweepers. Ice Beam should break the sub and I predict he will just destroy me with his attacks.
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Begin turn #22
manav95 withdrew Flygon!
manav95 sent out Suicune (lvl 100 Suicune)!
Suicune is exerting its Pressure!
Breloom used Substitute!
Breloom lost 12/48 (25%) of its health!
Breloom made a substitute!
Suicune's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Suicune regained 21/342 (6%) of its health!
Suicune is hurt by poison!
Suicune lost 21/342 (6%) of its health!
Breloom was badly poisoned!
OK, so he subs. He probably just wants to get rid of Suicune anyway and I decide to let him be lulled into a false sense of security. So I Ice Beam away at my target.
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Begin turn #23
Breloom is tightening its focus!
Suicune used Ice Beam!
It's super effective!
Breloom's substitute took damage for it!
Breloom's substitute faded!
Breloom used Focus Punch!
Suicune lost 243/342 (71%) of its health!
Suicune's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Suicune regained 21/342 (6%) of its health!
Suicune is hurt by poison!
Suicune lost 42/342 (12%) of its health!
Suicune fainted!
Breloom's Poison Heal restored health!
Breloom regained 6/48 (12%) of its health!
manav95 sent out Heatran (lvl 100 Heatran ?)!
Breloom FPs me and Suicune dies. Great. I decide to bring in Heatran and Fire Blast away. It should dent anything he sends in regardless.
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Begin turn #24
Tyranitar withdrew Breloom!
Tyranitar sent out Uxie (lvl 100 Uxie)!
Pointed stones dug into Uxie!
Uxie lost 6/48 (12%) of its health!
Heatran used Fire Blast!
Uxie lost 18/48 (37%) of its health!
Uxie fainted!
Tyranitar sent out Flygon (lvl 100 Flygon ?)!
Pointed stones dug into Flygon!
Flygon lost 3/48 (6%) of its health!
Uxie is out of here. And he sends in Gon. I decide to stay in because I predict a U-Turn and he expects Breloom to come in. So I click an attack and here it goes.
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Begin turn #25
Flygon used Earthquake!
It's super effective!
Heatran lost 135/323 (41%) of its health!
Heatran fainted!
manav95 sent out Breloom (lvl 100 Breloom ?)!
Lol deja vu. He did the same thing I did and I switch in the same thing he did. Breloom should be able to set up a sub and spore safely. I don't know what he is going to do but I will sub to scout his choice.
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Begin turn #26
Flygon used Earthquake!
It's not very effective...
Breloom lost 82/321 (25%) of its health!
Breloom used Substitute!
Breloom lost 80/321 (24%) of its health!
Breloom made a substitute!
Breloom's Poison Heal restored health!
Breloom regained 40/321 (12%) of its health!
What? EQ can break the sub. Now I decide to Spore him and it turns out to be critical later on. I think he has no one left to beat Breloom so he might as let Flygon get slept and pull out his sweeper. I make note of that but try to focus now.
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Begin turn #27
Flygon used Earthquake!
It's not very effective...
Breloom's substitute took damage for it!
Breloom's substitute faded!
Breloom used Spore!
Flygon fell asleep!
Breloom's Poison Heal restored health!
Breloom regained 40/321 (12%) of its health!
Spore puts him to sleep. He will switch now and I put up a spore. I know he will have a sweeper to set up on me so I have to sub to have any chance.
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Begin turn #28
Tyranitar withdrew Flygon!
Tyranitar sent out Breloom (lvl 100 Breloom ?)!
Pointed stones dug into Breloom!
Breloom lost 3/48 (6%) of its health!
Breloom used Substitute!
Breloom lost 80/321 (24%) of its health!
Breloom made a substitute!
Breloom's Poison Heal restored health!
Breloom regained 6/48 (12%) of its health!
Breloom's Poison Heal restored health!
Breloom regained 40/321 (12%) of its health!
Oh wow mirror match. This battle is intense. I decide to FP because he will either die or get a sub up and then get broken. If I switch, I have nothing that enjoys a 150 power STAB attack coming off of 130 base Attack.
Begin turn #29
Breloom is tightening its focus!
Breloom is tightening its focus!
Breloom used Focus Punch!
Breloom's substitute took damage for it!
Breloom's substitute faded!
Breloom used Focus Punch!
Breloom lost 42/48 (87%) of its health!
Breloom fainted!
Breloom's Poison Heal restored health!
Breloom regained 40/321 (12%) of its health!
Tyranitar sent out Kingdra (lvl 100 Kingdra ?)!
Pointed stones dug into Kingdra!
Kingdra lost 6/48 (12%) of its health!
The enemy Breloom dies and a Kingdra pops. This must be one of those set up sweepers that he saved for the late game. I decide to leave Breloom in because Flygon is Banded and is probably outsped after a DD. I predict he will DD so that he can outspeed my remaining pokes. I decide to Sub right now because I am guessing LO recoil and FP will wear it down enough to die. Since Flygon is asleep, I decide to sacrifice either my Flygon or Azelf as both can KO him with either Outrage or Ice Punch respectively.
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Begin turn #30
Kingdra used Waterfall!
It's not very effective...
Breloom lost 75/321 (23%) of its health!
Breloom flinched!
Breloom's Poison Heal restored health!
Breloom regained 40/321 (12%) of its health!
Crap he predicted that and Waterfalled me. Damn hax. I don’t notice an LO which indicates this is a bulky one. I hope Flygon could outspeed this thing with its low Speed EVs. Now I predict a DD coming my way so I sub up once again.
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Begin turn #31
Kingdra used Dragon Dance!
Kingdra's attack was raised!
Kingdra's speed was raised!
Breloom used Substitute!
Breloom lost 80/321 (24%) of its health!
Breloom made a substitute!
Breloom's Poison Heal restored health!
Breloom regained 40/321 (12%) of its health!
I get in position. I get a free FP in and it looks to be extremely powerful. Not much to say here, but gg I guess.
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Begin turn #32
Breloom is tightening its focus!
Kingdra used Waterfall!
It's not very effective...
Breloom's substitute took damage for it!
Breloom's substitute faded!
Breloom used Focus Punch!
Kingdra lost 42/48 (87%) of its health!
Breloom's Poison Heal restored health!
Breloom regained 40/321 (12%) of its health!
Crap it is a 2HKO. I was so used to Breloom OHKOing everything not resistant to Fighting with FP and now it is barely a 2HKO. At this point, I don’t know what he will do. I fear an attack is what most likely will happen and I need to prepare for that. I don’t know how much Azelf can do to Kingdra and I don’t feel like switching in anything just yet. A sub might be impossible with Breloom. I have Breloom do a Seed Bomb because that is the safest option.
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Begin turn #33
Kingdra used Rest!
Kingdra fell asleep!
Kingdra regained 48/48 (100%) of its health!
Kingdra's Chesto Berry cured its Sleep!
Breloom used Seed Bomb!
Kingdra lost 25/48 (52%) of its health!
Breloom's Poison Heal restored health!
Breloom regained 40/321 (12%) of its health!
Crap a ChestoRest Kingdra. Now that he is fully restored, I am at a dilemma here. I decide to sack Breloom and switch in Azelf to blow itself up and kill the evil sea dragon and then send in Flygon to Outrage his brother and become king of Flygonland. Don’t worry my mushroom, you did great today.
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Begin turn #34
Kingdra used Outrage!
Breloom lost 162/321 (50%) of its health!
Breloom fainted!
manav95 sent out Flygon (lvl 100 Flygon ?)!
Damn misclick. I need to get a new mouse. Now at this point, I am freaking out. I just lost myself the match here. Flygon is probably outsped now and will die to the Outrage. Sorry Azelf, you don’t get to win here. Pokelab needs to have a better selection option. Because misclicks are about as bad as hax itself.
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Begin turn #35
Kingdra used Outrage!
It's super effective!
Flygon lost 301/301 (100%) of its health!
Flygon fainted!
Kingdra became confused due to fatigue!
Kingdra became confused!
manav95 sent out Azelf (lvl 100 Azelf)!
Crap, I was about to forfeit here and just Explode to make this seem less bad. I do some damage calcs and find that Azelf has a tiny chance of KOing this sea monster with Zen Headbutt without a Band. This was a risk I was willing to take and since Kingdra is confused, I have a shot at the win here. Please pixie come through for me here.
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Begin turn #36
Azelf used Zen Headbutt!
Kingdra lost 21/48 (43%) of its health!
Kingdra is confused!
It hurt itself in confusion!
Kingdra lost 2/48 (4%) of its health!
Kingdra fainted!
@Tyranitar: crap
Tyranitar sent out Flygon (lvl 100 Flygon ?)!
Pointed stones dug into Flygon!
Flygon lost 3/48 (6%) of its health!
Lol, Hell yeah hax gods. Well now that the retarded sea monster is dead, now I am glad that Trick didn’t play much of a role as Flygon and its Scarf would still have rampaged through this guy. I hope he doesn’t wake up though and kill my Tar weak pixie.
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Begin turn #37
Azelf used Zen Headbutt!
Flygon lost 28/48 (58%) of its health!
Flygon is fast asleep.
It was Banded after all. I don’t care because unless the hax gods screw me over with a Zen miss and Flygon waking up, I win. GG Tyranitar.
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Begin turn #38
@Tyranitar: gg
Azelf used Zen Headbutt!
Flygon lost 11/48 (22%) of its health!
Flygon fainted!
manav95 wins!
Announcer: Flygon is unable to battle. The win goes to Azelf and manav95. Manav95 is the winner of the OU Shoddy Cup.
Manav95: Hell yeah Azelf, we did it. I knew that giving Heatran the rocks would save my ass a lot.
Azelf: Indeed. And no Tyranitar ever Pursuited my ass out of the match in this tourney. I feel so lucky.
Tyranitar: Damn it all. I hate to say it but manav95, you are a great trainer. I feel honored to have battled you. Now Bye.
He leaves
OK lets go on to Props and Slops:
Props
Tyranitar for the battle.
Azelf for beating Flygon and Kingdra.
Trick for not having mattered that much.
Breloom for sleeping Flygon and weakening Kingdra.
Heatran for rocks and being an effective Pokemon.
Jirachi for preventing Starmie from being a threat.
Slops
Me misclicking and not getting a guaranteed win.
Suicune for getting poisoned and beaten.
Flygon for dying to a misclick.
Me not learning that Heatrans with subs can be offensive as well.
OK this is my warstory. Rate and comment so I can make better warstories.
 
OK I understand that. I know that and I will try to repost this warstory with better formatting. Give me a day or 2.
 

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If you added some line breaks & Sprites & colours, I maybe able to read this properly...

Anyways, nice wall of text...I also don't get why you would run Zen Headbutt on an Azelf...
 
^ It was a CB Azelf, so yeah zen headbutt

anyway yeah, what the others said, formatting was ass, otherwise it wasn't too bad.

3/5
 
This warstory actually wasn't terrible. The battle itself wasn't too exciting, but your comments were pretty insightful for only your second warstory, and that counts for a lot in my book.
I did have one nitpick though. In turn 26, why did you sub before using spore? Flygon would have still been asleep and you would have had a sub.
 
Tip: don't reveal the opponents team at the beginning, or the suspense will drop.

Also, pictures, color, score, but you've heard that part already.

I skimmed it, but my eyes hurt. Will read more if it isn't a wall of text. It looks like a decent match.
 
Ahhh didn't know this battle woulda been warstoried, but confusion hax really hate me since i wanted to rest :/. GG though
 
Hurt my eyes reading this. I entreat you to add some neat pictures, and make this readable.

Apart from the crazy formatting, it was a nice battle, though some of the hax was bad.


I give it : ..... 3/5.
 
This is the format you guys wanted.
Hi, this is my second warstory. I know this battle isn't tense or anything, but it was close. I am not experienced in anyway. I realize this and know that this warstory is probably lacking. I know that the text has no color and I don't know how to add them on. And someone needs to make a Warmachine for Pokemon Lab.

My team:







Tyranitar's team: (the opponent)
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Announcer: It is time for the finals of the OU Shoddy Cup( this is a fictional tournament). Our competitors are manav95 and Tyranitar. Both are excellent trainers and both deserve to win. Only one can win,though, so both trainers must be cautious. They are now using new teams so you won't know what these 2 have up their sleeves. OK,Let's begin.

manav95: Come on Tyranitar. I am going to beat you. You better be prepared.

Tyranitar: We all know that you just won because of a fluke. My Pokemon are trained to the max. My knowledge of important damage calculations and strategy is unmatched. I have beaten many others in this Cup without breaking a sweat and 6-0ed most of them. You have struggled. What makes you think you can beat me?

manav95: I have a good knowledge of all that too. Don't underestimate me or you will regret it.

Tyranitar: Bring it on. I see no reason to underestimate you because this is the finals. En garde.

manav95 sent out Azelf (lvl 100 Azelf)!
Tyranitar sent out Uxie (lvl 100 Uxie)!

OK, so Tyranitar sends out Uxie against my Banded Azelf. OK stay focused. Uxie is most likely either a TrickScarfer or a Dual Screener. If it is a TrickScarfer, only Azelf or my Scarfed Flygon would mind being Scarfed. If it is a Dual Screener, then I will have to face an HO team and will struggle to do anything for 10 turns. Either way, TrickScarfer is more common and Flygon is the best switchin for that. I decide to play it safe and send in Flygon.

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Begin turn #1
manav95 withdrew Azelf!
manav95 sent out Flygon (lvl 100 Flygon ?)!
Uxie used Trick!
Uxie obtained Choice Scarf!
Flygon obtained Choice Scarf!

Tyranitar is intent on shutting me down. I don't know what he is going to do next. I figure he may switch to a U-Turn resist because Flygon is faster than Uxie. I pick U-Turn to scout his switchin.

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Begin turn #2
Flygon used U-turn!
It's super effective!
Uxie lost 12/48 (25%) of its health!
manav95 withdrew Flygon!
manav95 sent out Azelf (lvl 100 Azelf)!
Flygon went back to manav95!
Uxie used Trick!
Uxie obtained Choice Band!
Azelf obtained Choice Scarf!

Curses. After seeing Uxie still in, I knew he planned on Tricking me and so I switched in Azelf to take the Trick. I plan on U-Turning to scout his switchin and see his reaction.

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Begin turn #3
Tyranitar withdrew Uxie!
Tyranitar sent out Heatran (lvl 100 Heatran ?)!
Azelf used U-turn!
It's not very effective...
Heatran lost 3/48 (6%) of its health!
manav95 withdrew Azelf!
manav95 sent out Heatran (lvl 100 Heatran ?)!
Azelf went back to manav95!
Heatran's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Heatran regained 3/48 (6%) of its health!

He brings in Heatran. I swear that thing is everywhere. But not just any Heatran, it has Leftovers. That tells me it must be a bulky one. I think Tyranitar's team could be a balanced one with the Uxie lead and all. This one could be either a TormentTran to be a pain in the ass or a generic bulky set to sweep. I bring in ShucaTran to deal with this and get some rocks up. I know Heatran hasn't invested much in Speed, so my Heatran should outspeed it. Rocks away.

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Begin turn #4
Tyranitar withdrew Heatran!
Tyranitar sent out Starmie (lvl 100 Starmie)!
Heatran used Stealth Rock!
Pointed stones float in the air around your foe's team!

I did not want to see that. Starmie is a giant ass to my team. It hits 4 of my members super-effectively and I don't want to risk getting Flygon or Azelf or anyone unnecessarily crippled. I send in my SubCM Jirachi to deal with the pest with TBolt.

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Begin turn #5
manav95 withdrew Heatran!
manav95 sent out Jirachi (lvl 100 Jirachi)!
Starmie used Surf!
Jirachi lost 183/404 (45%) of its health!
Starmie lost 5/48 (10%) of its health!
Jirachi's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Jirachi regained 25/404 (6%) of its health!
At this point, I realize Jirachi is going to die. It will die to 2 surfs and TBolt will 2KHO that star. Starmie would be in range to be KOed by Flygon and possibly Stealth Rock. I decide to TBolt.

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Begin turn #6
Starmie used Surf!
Jirachi lost 195/404 (48%) of its health!
Starmie lost 5/48 (10%) of its health!
Jirachi used Thunderbolt!
It's super effective!
Starmie lost 33/48 (68%) of its health!
Starmie is paralysed! It may be unable to move!
Jirachi's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Jirachi regained 25/404 (6%) of its health!

Wow parahax. I have a tough decision to make. Starmie is now useless because the rocks will KO it if it switches out and tries to come back in and Rachi will murder it with TBolt. I decide to play it safe and TBolt because he may try to bring in Heatran to counter it.

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Begin turn #7
Tyranitar withdrew Starmie!
Tyranitar sent out Flygon (lvl 100 Flygon ?)!
Pointed stones dug into Flygon!
Flygon lost 3/48 (6%) of its health!
Jirachi used Thunderbolt!
It doesn't affect Flygon...
Jirachi's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Jirachi regained 25/404 (6%) of its health!

Wow, he decides to save it as death fodder. Unfortunately, he brings in a Flygon and threatens to EQ. I have 3 options. Switch to Tran, Flygon, or Breloom. Tran is risky because he may try to EQ me. Flygon is also risky because it gets walled by so many things and I am afraid of any Spikers. Breloom is the best because he resists EQ and U-Turn would shave a quarter off. It can also lure Tran in and I could set up with Suicune on it.

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Begin turn #8
manav95 withdrew Jirachi!
manav95 sent out Breloom (lvl 100 Breloom ?)!
Flygon used U-turn!
Breloom lost 82/321 (25%) of its health!
Tyranitar withdrew Flygon!
Tyranitar sent out Starmie (lvl 100 Starmie)!
Pointed stones dug into Starmie!
Starmie lost 6/48 (12%) of its health!
Starmie fainted!
Flygon went back to Tyranitar!
Breloom was badly poisoned!
Tyranitar sent out Heatran (lvl 100 Heatran ?)!
Pointed stones dug into Heatran!
Heatran lost 6/48 (12%) of its health!

Well Starmie is dead now and Heatran is against Breloom. I know it is still faster than Breloom and I will have to switch out. I decide to switch out to Heatran because I realize Suicune might be better off coming in later. I send in Heatran to deal with this fool.

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Begin turn #9
manav95 withdrew Breloom!
manav95 sent out Heatran (lvl 100 Heatran ?)!
Heatran used Substitute!
Heatran lost 12/48 (25%) of its health!
Heatran made a substitute!
Heatran's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Heatran regained 3/48 (6%) of its health!

He uses a Sub, so I’m guessing it is a Torment Tran. It won’t do much regardless because it only knows Lava Plume. I decide to Earth Power because I need to scout his switchin. I feel secure about this.

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Begin turn #10
Heatran used Earth Power!
Heatran's Shuca Berry weakened Earth Power's power!
It's super effective!
Heatran lost 188/323 (58%) of its health!
Heatran used Earth Power!
It's super effective!
Heatran's substitute took damage for it!
Heatran's substitute faded!
Heatran's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Heatran regained 3/48 (6%) of its health!

WTF What is this set? Seriously, Heatran could be a physical attacker if it can do this too. Now I am mad. I decide to switch to Flygon to take the Earth Power or Fire move that comes up. It can then force Heatran to switch out and give me time to come back into the game.

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Begin turn #11
manav95 withdrew Heatran!
manav95 sent out Flygon (lvl 100 Flygon ?)!
Heatran used Earth Power!
It doesn't affect Flygon...
Heatran's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Heatran regained 3/48 (6%) of its health!

OK that worked well. Heatran will probably switch out because I could eradicate him here and now. I U-Turn to avoid any ground immune pokes from setting up. Man am I having to think here.

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Begin turn #12
Flygon used U-turn!
It's not very effective...
Heatran lost 3/48 (6%) of its health!
manav95 withdrew Flygon!
manav95 sent out Jirachi (lvl 100 Jirachi)!
Flygon went back to manav95!
Heatran used Substitute!
Heatran lost 12/48 (25%) of its health!
Heatran made a substitute!
Jirachi's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Jirachi regained 25/404 (6%) of its health!
Heatran's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Heatran regained 3/48 (6%) of its health!

Lol. He predicted my U-Turn and sets up a Sub. This sucks. I send in Jirachi to die and hopefully break the sub before mopping up with my Flygon. Jirachi isn't going to last much longer anyway and I don't want Suicune Exploded on or Roared out to something Heatran can sub up on.

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Begin turn #13
Jirachi used Thunderbolt!
Heatran's substitute took damage for it!
Heatran's substitute faded!
Heatran used Flamethrower!
A critical hit!
It's super effective!
Jirachi lost 126/404 (31%) of its health!
Jirachi fainted!
Heatran's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Heatran regained 3/48 (6%) of its health!
manav95 sent out Flygon (lvl 100 Flygon ?)!

Yay useless crit. Heatran is now in the open and Flygon is prepped to murder him. I decide to EQ here since Uxie can be dealt with by Azelf. I just stay in to avoid the previous U-Turn debacle and maybe catch him off guard this time. The Heatran is annoying anyway and I don't want to deal with him again.

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Begin turn #14
Tyranitar withdrew Heatran!
Tyranitar sent out Uxie (lvl 100 Uxie)!
Pointed stones dug into Uxie!
Uxie lost 6/48 (12%) of its health!
Flygon used Earthquake!
It doesn't affect Uxie...

Uxie comes back in. Why did I think he was trying to overpredict again? I see a possible Trick coming in again. I believe he wants his Scarf back to Trick it to something without relying on Uxie's mediocre speed. I bring in Azelf because he wants his Band back to sweep this guy.

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Begin turn #15
manav95 withdrew Flygon!
manav95 sent out Azelf (lvl 100 Azelf)!
Uxie used U-turn!
It's super effective!
Azelf lost 168/291 (57%) of its health!
Tyranitar withdrew Uxie!
Tyranitar sent out Heatran (lvl 100 Heatran ?)!
Pointed stones dug into Heatran!
Heatran lost 6/48 (12%) of its health!
Uxie went back to Tyranitar!
Heatran's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Heatran regained 3/48 (6%) of its health!

Oh wow. Uxie U-turns straight into the lava dome again. I decide to stay in and Zen Headbutt to see if it can break the sub. Yeah I know what I am doing. I just don't want to risk some hax screwing up my team members or a status move.

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Begin turn #16
Azelf used Zen Headbutt!
It's not very effective...
Heatran lost 9/48 (18%) of its health!
Heatran used Substitute!
Heatran lost 12/48 (25%) of its health!
Heatran made a substitute!
Heatran's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Heatran regained 3/48 (6%) of its health!

Crap,only 18%. Azelf needs the Band back. At this point, I decide to bring in Suicune because I ran out of excuses to not bring it in. Maybe I should have done that before instead of using the overgrown dragonfly. This Heatran needs to go.

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Begin turn #17
manav95 withdrew Azelf!
manav95 sent out Suicune (lvl 100 Suicune)!
Suicune is exerting its Pressure!
Heatran used Flamethrower!
It's not very effective...
Suicune lost 78/342 (22%) of its health!
Suicune's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Suicune regained 21/342 (6%) of its health!
Heatran's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Heatran regained 3/48 (6%) of its health!

Flamethrower does some to Suicune but whatever. My Suicune is the offensive HP Electric one. He should outspeed and hopefully KO it quick. This Heatran is a pain in the ass anyway. Hydro Pump away.

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Begin turn #18
Suicune used Hydro Pump!
It's super effective!
Heatran's substitute took damage for it!
Heatran's substitute faded!
Heatran used Toxic!
Suicune was badly poisoned!
Suicune's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Suicune regained 21/342 (6%) of its health!
Suicune is hurt by poison!
Suicune lost 21/342 (6%) of its health!
Heatran's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Heatran regained 3/48 (6%) of its health!

Crap, it had Toxic. For so long, I kept that at bay and now my Suicune is poisoned. This is bad. I decide to CM expecting a grass type to switch in and hopefully dispatch one.

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Begin turn #19
Tyranitar withdrew Heatran!
Tyranitar sent out Uxie (lvl 100 Uxie)!
Pointed stones dug into Uxie!
Uxie lost 6/48 (12%) of its health!
Suicune used Calm Mind!
Suicune's special attack was raised!
Suicune's special defence was raised!
Suicune's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Suicune regained 21/342 (6%) of its health!
Suicune is hurt by poison!
Suicune lost 42/342 (12%) of its health!

OK no grass type out yet tells me he has none or he fears an Ice Beam. I am uncertain whether Suicune outspeeds Uxie or not but I try to play it safe and switch in Flygon. This is because he may U-Turn out and Azelf would die and even if he Tricks Flygon wouldn't be as pissed off as my other team members. Besides a Band might help him to perform a necessary kill later on. I didn't realize that this decision wouldn't have been that bad for me in the long run.

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Begin turn #20
manav95 withdrew Suicune!
manav95 sent out Flygon (lvl 100 Flygon ?)!
Uxie used Trick!
Uxie obtained Choice Scarf!
Flygon obtained Choice Band!

OK just as I expected. Still I am glad that Azelf isn't dead yet and the Scarf could help out against any dragons.(wink) I predict him sending in Heatran to block U-Turn and so I decide to EQ. Hey I get to overpredict too you know.

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Begin turn #21
Tyranitar withdrew Uxie!
Tyranitar sent out Heatran (lvl 100 Heatran ?)!
Pointed stones dug into Heatran!
Heatran lost 6/48 (12%) of its health!
Flygon used Earthquake!
It's super effective!
Heatran lost 9/48 (18%) of its health!
Heatran fainted!
Tyranitar sent out Breloom (lvl 100 Breloom ?)!
Pointed stones dug into Breloom!
Breloom lost 3/48 (6%) of its health!

Yeah Tran is dead now. But unfortunately Breloom is in and walls me. I decide to switch in Suicune because it is poisoned anyway and Azelf might hold out longer against any sweepers. Ice Beam should break the sub and I predict he will just destroy me with his attacks.

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Begin turn #22
manav95 withdrew Flygon!
manav95 sent out Suicune (lvl 100 Suicune)!
Suicune is exerting its Pressure!
Breloom used Substitute!
Breloom lost 12/48 (25%) of its health!
Breloom made a substitute!
Suicune's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Suicune regained 21/342 (6%) of its health!
Suicune is hurt by poison!
Suicune lost 21/342 (6%) of its health!
Breloom was badly poisoned!

OK, so he subs. He probably just wants to get rid of Suicune anyway and I decide to let him be lulled into a false sense of security. So I Ice Beam away at my target.

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Begin turn #23
Breloom is tightening its focus!
Suicune used Ice Beam!
It's super effective!
Breloom's substitute took damage for it!
Breloom's substitute faded!
Breloom used Focus Punch!
Suicune lost 243/342 (71%) of its health!
Suicune's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Suicune regained 21/342 (6%) of its health!
Suicune is hurt by poison!
Suicune lost 42/342 (12%) of its health!
Suicune fainted!
Breloom's Poison Heal restored health!
Breloom regained 6/48 (12%) of its health!
manav95 sent out Heatran (lvl 100 Heatran ?)!

Breloom FPs me and Suicune dies. Great. I decide to bring in Heatran and Fire Blast away. It should dent anything he sends in regardless.

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Begin turn #24
Tyranitar withdrew Breloom!
Tyranitar sent out Uxie (lvl 100 Uxie)!
Pointed stones dug into Uxie!
Uxie lost 6/48 (12%) of its health!
Heatran used Fire Blast!
Uxie lost 18/48 (37%) of its health!
Uxie fainted!
Tyranitar sent out Flygon (lvl 100 Flygon ?)!
Pointed stones dug into Flygon!
Flygon lost 3/48 (6%) of its health!

Uxie is out of here. And he sends in Gon. I decide to stay in because I predict a U-Turn and he expects Breloom to come in. So I click an attack and here it goes.

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Begin turn #25
Flygon used Earthquake!
It's super effective!
Heatran lost 135/323 (41%) of its health!
Heatran fainted!
manav95 sent out Breloom (lvl 100 Breloom ?)!

Lol deja vu. He did the same thing I did and I switch in the same thing he did. Breloom should be able to set up a sub and spore safely. I don't know what he is going to do but I will sub to scout his choice.

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Begin turn #26
Flygon used Earthquake!
It's not very effective...
Breloom lost 82/321 (25%) of its health!
Breloom used Substitute!
Breloom lost 80/321 (24%) of its health!
Breloom made a substitute!
Breloom's Poison Heal restored health!
Breloom regained 40/321 (12%) of its health!

What? EQ can break the sub. Now I decide to Spore him and it turns out to be critical later on. I think he has no one left to beat Breloom so he might as let Flygon get slept and pull out his sweeper. I make note of that but try to focus now.

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Begin turn #27
Flygon used Earthquake!
It's not very effective...
Breloom's substitute took damage for it!
Breloom's substitute faded!
Breloom used Spore!
Flygon fell asleep!
Breloom's Poison Heal restored health!
Breloom regained 40/321 (12%) of its health!

Spore puts him to sleep. He will switch now and I put up a spore. I know he will have a sweeper to set up on me so I have to sub to have any chance.

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Begin turn #28
Tyranitar withdrew Flygon!
Tyranitar sent out Breloom (lvl 100 Breloom ?)!
Pointed stones dug into Breloom!
Breloom lost 3/48 (6%) of its health!
Breloom used Substitute!
Breloom lost 80/321 (24%) of its health!
Breloom made a substitute!
Breloom's Poison Heal restored health!
Breloom regained 6/48 (12%) of its health!
Breloom's Poison Heal restored health!
Breloom regained 40/321 (12%) of its health!

Oh wow mirror match. This battle is intense. I decide to FP because he will either die or get a sub up and then get broken. If I switch, I have nothing that enjoys a 150 power STAB attack coming off of 130 base Attack.

Begin turn #29
Breloom is tightening its focus!
Breloom is tightening its focus!
Breloom used Focus Punch!
Breloom's substitute took damage for it!
Breloom's substitute faded!
Breloom used Focus Punch!
Breloom lost 42/48 (87%) of its health!
Breloom fainted!
Breloom's Poison Heal restored health!
Breloom regained 40/321 (12%) of its health!
Tyranitar sent out Kingdra (lvl 100 Kingdra ?)!
Pointed stones dug into Kingdra!
Kingdra lost 6/48 (12%) of its health!

The enemy Breloom dies and a Kingdra pops. This must be one of those set up sweepers that he saved for the late game. I decide to leave Breloom in because Flygon is Banded and is probably outsped after a DD. I predict he will DD so that he can outspeed my remaining pokes. I decide to Sub right now because I am guessing LO recoil and FP will wear it down enough to die. Since Flygon is asleep, I decide to sacrifice either my Flygon or Azelf as both can KO him with either Outrage or Ice Punch respectively.

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Begin turn #30
Kingdra used Waterfall!
It's not very effective...
Breloom lost 75/321 (23%) of its health!
Breloom flinched!
Breloom's Poison Heal restored health!
Breloom regained 40/321 (12%) of its health!

Crap he predicted that and Waterfalled me. Damn hax. I don’t notice an LO which indicates this is a bulky one. I hope Flygon could outspeed this thing with its low Speed EVs. Now I predict a DD coming my way so I sub up once again.

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Begin turn #31
Kingdra used Dragon Dance!
Kingdra's attack was raised!
Kingdra's speed was raised!
Breloom used Substitute!
Breloom lost 80/321 (24%) of its health!
Breloom made a substitute!
Breloom's Poison Heal restored health!
Breloom regained 40/321 (12%) of its health!

I get in position. I get a free FP in and it looks to be extremely powerful. Not much to say here, but gg I guess.

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Begin turn #32
Breloom is tightening its focus!
Kingdra used Waterfall!
It's not very effective...
Breloom's substitute took damage for it!
Breloom's substitute faded!
Breloom used Focus Punch!
Kingdra lost 42/48 (87%) of its health!
Breloom's Poison Heal restored health!
Breloom regained 40/321 (12%) of its health!

Crap it is a 2HKO. I was so used to Breloom OHKOing everything not resistant to Fighting with FP and now it is barely a 2HKO. At this point, I don’t know what he will do. I fear an attack is what most likely will happen and I need to prepare for that. I don’t know how much Azelf can do to Kingdra and I don’t feel like switching in anything just yet. A sub might be impossible with Breloom. I have Breloom do a Seed Bomb because that is the safest option.

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Begin turn #33
Kingdra used Rest!
Kingdra fell asleep!
Kingdra regained 48/48 (100%) of its health!
Kingdra's Chesto Berry cured its Sleep!
Breloom used Seed Bomb!
Kingdra lost 25/48 (52%) of its health!
Breloom's Poison Heal restored health!
Breloom regained 40/321 (12%) of its health!

Crap a ChestoRest Kingdra. Now that he is fully restored, I am at a dilemma here. I decide to sack Breloom and switch in Azelf to blow itself up and kill the evil sea dragon and then send in Flygon to Outrage his brother and become king of Flygonland. Don’t worry my mushroom, you did great today.

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Begin turn #34
Kingdra used Outrage!
Breloom lost 162/321 (50%) of its health!
Breloom fainted!
manav95 sent out Flygon (lvl 100 Flygon ?)!

Damn misclick. I need to get a new mouse. Now at this point, I am freaking out. I just lost myself the match here. Flygon is probably outsped now and will die to the Outrage. Sorry Azelf, you don’t get to win here. Pokelab needs to have a better selection option. Because misclicks are about as bad as hax itself.

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Begin turn #35
Kingdra used Outrage!
It's super effective!
Flygon lost 301/301 (100%) of its health!
Flygon fainted!
Kingdra became confused due to fatigue!
Kingdra became confused!
manav95 sent out Azelf (lvl 100 Azelf)!

Crap, I was about to forfeit here and just Explode to make this seem less bad. I do some damage calcs and find that Azelf has a tiny chance of KOing this sea monster with Zen Headbutt without a Band. This was a risk I was willing to take and since Kingdra is confused, I have a shot at the win here. Please pixie come through for me here.

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Begin turn #36
Azelf used Zen Headbutt!
Kingdra lost 21/48 (43%) of its health!
Kingdra is confused!
It hurt itself in confusion!
Kingdra lost 2/48 (4%) of its health!
Kingdra fainted!
@Tyranitar: crap
Tyranitar sent out Flygon (lvl 100 Flygon ?)!
Pointed stones dug into Flygon!
Flygon lost 3/48 (6%) of its health!

Lol, Hell yeah hax gods. Well now that the retarded sea monster is dead, now I am glad that Trick didn’t play much of a role as Flygon and its Scarf would still have rampaged through this guy. I hope he doesn’t wake up though and kill my Tar weak pixie.

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Begin turn #37
Azelf used Zen Headbutt!
Flygon lost 28/48 (58%) of its health!
Flygon is fast asleep.

It was Banded after all. I don’t care because unless the hax gods screw me over with a Zen miss and Flygon waking up, I win. GG Tyranitar.

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Begin turn #38

@Tyranitar: gg
Azelf used Zen Headbutt!
Flygon lost 11/48 (22%) of its health!
Flygon fainted!
manav95 wins!

Announcer: Flygon is unable to battle. The win goes to Azelf and manav95. Manav95 is the winner of the OU Shoddy Cup.
Manav95: Hell yeah Azelf, we did it. I knew that giving Heatran the rocks would save my ass a lot.
Azelf: Indeed. And no Tyranitar ever Pursuited my ass out of the match in this tourney. I feel so lucky.
Tyranitar: Damn it all. I hate to say it but manav95, you are a great trainer. I feel honored to have battled you. Now Bye.
He leaves

OK lets go on to Props and Slops:

Props
Tyranitar for the battle.
Azelf for beating Flygon and Kingdra.
Trick for not having mattered that much.
Breloom for sleeping Flygon and weakening Kingdra.
Heatran for rocks and being an effective Pokemon.
Jirachi for preventing Starmie from being a threat.

Slops
Me misclicking and not getting a guaranteed win.
Suicune for getting poisoned and beaten.
Flygon for dying to a misclick.
Me not learning that Heatrans with subs can be offensive as well.

OK this is my warstory. Rate and comment so I can make better warstories.
 
The second one is much better with spacing etc. Some sprites or percentages at the end of each turn would have been nice. Overall nice battle and a close ending.
 
9/10. I like the announcer thing and the "background" of the match. Glad you fixed the format too, though it might be a little bit better if you take what you have in the new version and replace the original post with that so people are more inclined to initially read it.
 
Hey there, nice warstory.
The only thing bothering me is the layout so I changed it a bit.
You might want to add percentages at the end of the turn
and the score after each KO as well.
Hope I helped!


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Manav95's team:



Tyranitar's team at the end.


Announcer: It is time for the finals of the OU Shoddy Cup( this is a fictional tournament). Our competitors are manav95 and Tyranitar. Both are excellent trainers and both deserve to win. Only one can win,though, so both trainers must be cautious. They are now using new teams so you won't know what these 2 have up their sleeves. OK,Let's begin.

manav95: Come on Tyranitar. I am going to beat you. You better be prepared.

Tyranitar: We all know that you just won because of a fluke. My Pokemon are trained to the max. My knowledge of important damage calculations and strategy is unmatched. I have beaten many others in this Cup without breaking a sweat and 6-0ed most of them. You have struggled. What makes you think you can beat me?

manav95: I have a good knowledge of all that too. Don't underestimate me or you will regret it.

Tyranitar: Bring it on. I see no reason to underestimate you because this is the finals. En garde.




manav95 sent out Azelf (lvl 100 Azelf)!
Tyranitar sent out Uxie (lvl 100 Uxie)!


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OK, so Tyranitar sends out Uxie against my Banded Azelf. OK stay focused. Uxie is most likely either a TrickScarfer or a Dual Screener. If it is a TrickScarfer, only Azelf or my Scarfed Flygon would mind being Scarfed. If it is a Dual Screener, then I will have to face an HO team and will struggle to do anything for 10 turns. Either way, TrickScarfer is more common and Flygon is the best switchin for that. I decide to play it safe and send in Flygon.

manav95 withdrew Azelf!
manav95 sent out Flygon (lvl 100 Flygon ?)!
Uxie used Trick!
Uxie obtained Choice Scarf!
Flygon obtained Choice Scarf!


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Tyranitar is intent on shutting me down. I don't know what he is going to do next. I figure he may switch to a U-Turn resist because Flygon is faster than Uxie. I pick U-Turn to scout his switchin.

Flygon used U-turn!
It's super effective!
Uxie lost 12/48 (25%) of its health!
manav95 withdrew Flygon!
manav95 sent out Azelf (lvl 100 Azelf)!
Flygon went back to manav95!
Uxie used Trick!
Uxie obtained Choice Band!
Azelf obtained Choice Scarf!


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Curses. After seeing Uxie still in, I knew he planned on Tricking me and so I switched in Azelf to take the Trick. I plan on U-Turning to scout his switchin and see his reaction.

Tyranitar withdrew Uxie!
Tyranitar sent out Heatran (lvl 100 Heatran ?)!
Azelf used U-turn!
It's not very effective...
Heatran lost 3/48 (6%) of its health!
manav95 withdrew Azelf!
manav95 sent out Heatran (lvl 100 Heatran ?)!
Azelf went back to manav95!
Heatran's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Heatran regained 3/48 (6%) of its health!


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He brings in Heatran. I swear that thing is everywhere. But not just any Heatran, it has Leftovers. That tells me it must be a bulky one. I think Tyranitar's team could be a balanced one with the Uxie lead and all. This one could be either a TormentTran to be a pain in the ass or a generic bulky set to sweep. I bring in ShucaTran to deal with this and get some rocks up. I know Heatran hasn't invested much in Speed, so my Heatran should outspeed it. Rocks away.

Tyranitar withdrew Heatran!
Tyranitar sent out Starmie (lvl 100 Starmie)!
Heatran used Stealth Rock!
Pointed stones float in the air around your foe's team!


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I did not want to see that. Starmie is a giant ass to my team. It hits 4 of my members super-effectively and I don't want to risk getting Flygon or Azelf or anyone unnecessarily crippled. I send in my SubCM Jirachi to deal with the pest with TBolt.

manav95 withdrew Heatran!
manav95 sent out Jirachi (lvl 100 Jirachi)!
Starmie used Surf!
Jirachi lost 183/404 (45%) of its health!
Starmie lost 5/48 (10%) of its health!
Jirachi's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Jirachi regained 25/404 (6%) of its health!


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At this point, I realize Jirachi is going to die. It will die to 2 surfs and TBolt will 2KHO that star. Starmie would be in range to be KOed by Flygon and possibly Stealth Rock. I decide to TBolt.

Starmie used Surf!
Jirachi lost 195/404 (48%) of its health!
Starmie lost 5/48 (10%) of its health!
Jirachi used Thunderbolt!
It's super effective!
Starmie lost 33/48 (68%) of its health!
Starmie is paralysed! It may be unable to move!
Jirachi's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Jirachi regained 25/404 (6%) of its health!


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Wow parahax. I have a tough decision to make. Starmie is now useless because the rocks will KO it if it switches out and tries to come back in and Rachi will murder it with TBolt. I decide to play it safe and TBolt because he may try to bring in Heatran to counter it.

Tyranitar withdrew Starmie!
Tyranitar sent out Flygon (lvl 100 Flygon ?)!
Pointed stones dug into Flygon!
Flygon lost 3/48 (6%) of its health!
Jirachi used Thunderbolt!
It doesn't affect Flygon...
Jirachi's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Jirachi regained 25/404 (6%) of its health!


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Wow, he decides to save it as death fodder. Unfortunately, he brings in a Flygon and threatens to EQ. I have 3 options. Switch to Tran, Flygon, or Breloom. Tran is risky because he may try to EQ me. Flygon is also risky because it gets walled by so many things and I am afraid of any Spikers. Breloom is the best because he resists EQ and U-Turn would shave a quarter off. It can also lure Tran in and I could set up with Suicune on it.

manav95 withdrew Jirachi!
manav95 sent out Breloom (lvl 100 Breloom ?)!
Flygon used U-turn!
Breloom lost 82/321 (25%) of its health!
Tyranitar withdrew Flygon!
Tyranitar sent out Starmie (lvl 100 Starmie)!
Pointed stones dug into Starmie!
Starmie lost 6/48 (12%) of its health!
Starmie fainted!
Flygon went back to Tyranitar!
Breloom was badly poisoned!
Tyranitar sent out Heatran (lvl 100 Heatran ?)!
Pointed stones dug into Heatran!
Heatran lost 6/48 (12%) of its health!


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Well Starmie is dead now and Heatran is against Breloom. I know it is still faster than Breloom and I will have to switch out. I decide to switch out to Heatran because I realize Suicune might be better off coming in later. I send in Heatran to deal with this fool.

manav95 withdrew Breloom!
manav95 sent out Heatran (lvl 100 Heatran ?)!
Heatran used Substitute!
Heatran lost 12/48 (25%) of its health!
Heatran made a substitute!
Heatran's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Heatran regained 3/48 (6%) of its health!


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He uses a Sub, so I’m guessing it is a Torment Tran. It won’t do much regardless because it only knows Lava Plume. I decide to Earth Power because I need to scout his switchin. I feel secure about this.

Heatran used Earth Power!
Heatran's Shuca Berry weakened Earth Power's power!
It's super effective!
Heatran lost 188/323 (58%) of its health!
Heatran used Earth Power!
It's super effective!
Heatran's substitute took damage for it!
Heatran's substitute faded!
Heatran's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Heatran regained 3/48 (6%) of its health!


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WTF What is this set? Seriously, Heatran could be a physical attacker if it can do this too. Now I am mad. I decide to switch to Flygon to take the Earth Power or Fire move that comes up. It can then force Heatran to switch out and give me time to come back into the game.

manav95 withdrew Heatran!
manav95 sent out Flygon (lvl 100 Flygon ?)!
Heatran used Earth Power!
It doesn't affect Flygon...
Heatran's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Heatran regained 3/48 (6%) of its health!


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OK that worked well. Heatran will probably switch out because I could eradicate him here and now. I U-Turn to avoid any ground immune pokes from setting up. Man am I having to think here.

Flygon used U-turn!
It's not very effective...
Heatran lost 3/48 (6%) of its health!
manav95 withdrew Flygon!
manav95 sent out Jirachi (lvl 100 Jirachi)!
Flygon went back to manav95!
Heatran used Substitute!
Heatran lost 12/48 (25%) of its health!
Heatran made a substitute!
Jirachi's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Jirachi regained 25/404 (6%) of its health!
Heatran's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Heatran regained 3/48 (6%) of its health!


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Lol. He predicted my U-Turn and sets up a Sub. This sucks. I send in Jirachi to die and hopefully break the sub before mopping up with my Flygon. Jirachi isn't going to last much longer anyway and I don't want Suicune Exploded on or Roared out to something Heatran can sub up on.

Jirachi used Thunderbolt!
Heatran's substitute took damage for it!
Heatran's substitute faded!
Heatran used Flamethrower!
A critical hit!
It's super effective!
Jirachi lost 126/404 (31%) of its health!
Jirachi fainted!
Heatran's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Heatran regained 3/48 (6%) of its health!
manav95 sent out Flygon (lvl 100 Flygon ?)!


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Yay useless crit. Heatran is now in the open and Flygon is prepped to murder him. I decide to EQ here since Uxie can be dealt with by Azelf. I just stay in to avoid the previous U-Turn debacle and maybe catch him off guard this time. The Heatran is annoying anyway and I don't want to deal with him again.

Tyranitar withdrew Heatran!
Tyranitar sent out Uxie (lvl 100 Uxie)!
Pointed stones dug into Uxie!
Uxie lost 6/48 (12%) of its health!
Flygon used Earthquake!
It doesn't affect Uxie...


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Uxie comes back in. Why did I think he was trying to overpredict again? I see a possible Trick coming in again. I believe he wants his Scarf back to Trick it to something without relying on Uxie's mediocre speed. I bring in Azelf because he wants his Band back to sweep this guy.

manav95 withdrew Flygon!
manav95 sent out Azelf (lvl 100 Azelf)!
Uxie used U-turn!
It's super effective!
Azelf lost 168/291 (57%) of its health!
Tyranitar withdrew Uxie!
Tyranitar sent out Heatran (lvl 100 Heatran ?)!
Pointed stones dug into Heatran!
Heatran lost 6/48 (12%) of its health!
Uxie went back to Tyranitar!
Heatran's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Heatran regained 3/48 (6%) of its health!


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Oh wow. Uxie U-turns straight into the lava dome again. I decide to stay in and Zen Headbutt to see if it can break the sub. Yeah I know what I am doing. I just don't want to risk some hax screwing up my team members or a status move.

Azelf used Zen Headbutt!
It's not very effective...
Heatran lost 9/48 (18%) of its health!
Heatran used Substitute!
Heatran lost 12/48 (25%) of its health!
Heatran made a substitute!
Heatran's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Heatran regained 3/48 (6%) of its health!


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Crap,only 18%. Azelf needs the Band back. At this point, I decide to bring in Suicune because I ran out of excuses to not bring it in. Maybe I should have done that before instead of using the overgrown dragonfly. This Heatran needs to go.

manav95 withdrew Azelf!
manav95 sent out Suicune (lvl 100 Suicune)!
Suicune is exerting its Pressure!
Heatran used Flamethrower!
It's not very effective...
Suicune lost 78/342 (22%) of its health!
Suicune's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Suicune regained 21/342 (6%) of its health!
Heatran's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Heatran regained 3/48 (6%) of its health!


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Flamethrower does some to Suicune but whatever. My Suicune is the offensive HP Electric one. He should outspeed and hopefully KO it quick. This Heatran is a pain in the ass anyway. Hydro Pump away.

Suicune used Hydro Pump!
It's super effective!
Heatran's substitute took damage for it!
Heatran's substitute faded!
Heatran used Toxic!
Suicune was badly poisoned!
Suicune's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Suicune regained 21/342 (6%) of its health!
Suicune is hurt by poison!
Suicune lost 21/342 (6%) of its health!
Heatran's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Heatran regained 3/48 (6%) of its health!


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Crap, it had Toxic. For so long, I kept that at bay and now my Suicune is poisoned. This is bad. I decide to CM expecting a grass type to switch in and hopefully dispatch one.

Tyranitar withdrew Heatran!
Tyranitar sent out Uxie (lvl 100 Uxie)!
Pointed stones dug into Uxie!
Uxie lost 6/48 (12%) of its health!
Suicune used Calm Mind!
Suicune's special attack was raised!
Suicune's special defence was raised!
Suicune's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Suicune regained 21/342 (6%) of its health!
Suicune is hurt by poison!
Suicune lost 42/342 (12%) of its health!


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OK no grass type out yet tells me he has none or he fears an Ice Beam. I am uncertain whether Suicune outspeeds Uxie or not but I try to play it safe and switch in Flygon. This is because he may U-Turn out and Azelf would die and even if he Tricks Flygon wouldn't be as pissed off as my other team members. Besides a Band might help him to perform a necessary kill later on. I didn't realize that this decision wouldn't have been that bad for me in the long run.

manav95 withdrew Suicune!
manav95 sent out Flygon (lvl 100 Flygon ?)!
Uxie used Trick!
Uxie obtained Choice Scarf!
Flygon obtained Choice Band!


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OK just as I expected. Still I am glad that Azelf isn't dead yet and the Scarf could help out against any dragons.(wink) I predict him sending in Heatran to block U-Turn and so I decide to EQ. Hey I get to overpredict too you know.

Tyranitar withdrew Uxie!
Tyranitar sent out Heatran (lvl 100 Heatran ?)!
Pointed stones dug into Heatran!
Heatran lost 6/48 (12%) of its health!
Flygon used Earthquake!
It's super effective!
Heatran lost 9/48 (18%) of its health!
Heatran fainted!
Tyranitar sent out Breloom (lvl 100 Breloom ?)!
Pointed stones dug into Breloom!
Breloom lost 3/48 (6%) of its health!


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Yeah Tran is dead now. But unfortunately Breloom is in and walls me. I decide to switch in Suicune because it is poisoned anyway and Azelf might hold out longer against any sweepers. Ice Beam should break the sub and I predict he will just destroy me with his attacks.

manav95 withdrew Flygon!
manav95 sent out Suicune (lvl 100 Suicune)!
Suicune is exerting its Pressure!
Breloom used Substitute!
Breloom lost 12/48 (25%) of its health!
Breloom made a substitute!
Suicune's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Suicune regained 21/342 (6%) of its health!
Suicune is hurt by poison!
Suicune lost 21/342 (6%) of its health!
Breloom was badly poisoned!


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OK, so he subs. He probably just wants to get rid of Suicune anyway and I decide to let him be lulled into a false sense of security. So I Ice Beam away at my target.

Breloom is tightening its focus!
Suicune used Ice Beam!
It's super effective!
Breloom's substitute took damage for it!
Breloom's substitute faded!
Breloom used Focus Punch!
Suicune lost 243/342 (71%) of its health!
Suicune's Leftovers restored its health a little!
Suicune regained 21/342 (6%) of its health!
Suicune is hurt by poison!
Suicune lost 42/342 (12%) of its health!
Suicune fainted!
Breloom's Poison Heal restored health!
Breloom regained 6/48 (12%) of its health!
manav95 sent out Heatran (lvl 100 Heatran ?)!


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Breloom FPs me and Suicune dies. Great. I decide to bring in Heatran and Fire Blast away. It should dent anything he sends in regardless.

Tyranitar withdrew Breloom!
Tyranitar sent out Uxie (lvl 100 Uxie)!
Pointed stones dug into Uxie!
Uxie lost 6/48 (12%) of its health!
Heatran used Fire Blast!
Uxie lost 18/48 (37%) of its health!
Uxie fainted!
Tyranitar sent out Flygon (lvl 100 Flygon ?)!
Pointed stones dug into Flygon!
Flygon lost 3/48 (6%) of its health!


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Uxie is out of here. And he sends in Gon. I decide to stay in because I predict a U-Turn and he expects Breloom to come in. So I click an attack and here it goes.

Flygon used Earthquake!
It's super effective!
Heatran lost 135/323 (41%) of its health!
Heatran fainted!
manav95 sent out Breloom (lvl 100 Breloom ?)!


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Lol deja vu. He did the same thing I did and I switch in the same thing he did. Breloom should be able to set up a sub and spore safely. I don't know what he is going to do but I will sub to scout his choice.

Flygon used Earthquake!
It's not very effective...
Breloom lost 82/321 (25%) of its health!
Breloom used Substitute!
Breloom lost 80/321 (24%) of its health!
Breloom made a substitute!
Breloom's Poison Heal restored health!
Breloom regained 40/321 (12%) of its health!


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What? EQ can break the sub. Now I decide to Spore him and it turns out to be critical later on. I think he has no one left to beat Breloom so he might as let Flygon get slept and pull out his sweeper. I make note of that but try to focus now.

Flygon used Earthquake!
It's not very effective...
Breloom's substitute took damage for it!
Breloom's substitute faded!
Breloom used Spore!
Flygon fell asleep!
Breloom's Poison Heal restored health!
Breloom regained 40/321 (12%) of its health!


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Spore puts him to sleep. He will switch now and I put up a spore. I know he will have a sweeper to set up on me so I have to sub to have any chance.

Tyranitar withdrew Flygon!
Tyranitar sent out Breloom (lvl 100 Breloom ?)!
Pointed stones dug into Breloom!
Breloom lost 3/48 (6%) of its health!
Breloom used Substitute!
Breloom lost 80/321 (24%) of its health!
Breloom made a substitute!
Breloom's Poison Heal restored health!
Breloom regained 6/48 (12%) of its health!
Breloom's Poison Heal restored health!
Breloom regained 40/321 (12%) of its health!

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Oh wow mirror match. This battle is intense. I decide to FP because he will either die or get a sub up and then get broken. If I switch, I have nothing that enjoys a 150 power STAB attack coming off of 130 base Attack.

Breloom is tightening its focus!
Breloom is tightening its focus!
Breloom used Focus Punch!
Breloom's substitute took damage for it!
Breloom's substitute faded!
Breloom used Focus Punch!
Breloom lost 42/48 (87%) of its health!
Breloom fainted!
Breloom's Poison Heal restored health!
Breloom regained 40/321 (12%) of its health!
Tyranitar sent out Kingdra (lvl 100 Kingdra ?)!
Pointed stones dug into Kingdra!
Kingdra lost 6/48 (12%) of its health!


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The enemy Breloom dies and a Kingdra pops. This must be one of those set up sweepers that he saved for the late game. I decide to leave Breloom in because Flygon is Banded and is probably outsped after a DD. I predict he will DD so that he can outspeed my remaining pokes. I decide to Sub right now because I am guessing LO recoil and FP will wear it down enough to die. Since Flygon is asleep, I decide to sacrifice either my Flygon or Azelf as both can KO him with either Outrage or Ice Punch respectively.

Kingdra used Waterfall!
It's not very effective...
Breloom lost 75/321 (23%) of its health!
Breloom flinched!
Breloom's Poison Heal restored health!
Breloom regained 40/321 (12%) of its health!


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Crap he predicted that and Waterfalled me. Damn hax. I don’t notice an LO which indicates this is a bulky one. I hope Flygon could outspeed this thing with its low Speed EVs. Now I predict a DD coming my way so I sub up once again.

Kingdra used Dragon Dance!
Kingdra's attack was raised!
Kingdra's speed was raised!
Breloom used Substitute!
Breloom lost 80/321 (24%) of its health!
Breloom made a substitute!
Breloom's Poison Heal restored health!
Breloom regained 40/321 (12%) of its health!


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I get in position. I get a free FP in and it looks to be extremely powerful. Not much to say here, but gg I guess.

Breloom is tightening its focus!
Kingdra used Waterfall!
It's not very effective...
Breloom's substitute took damage for it!
Breloom's substitute faded!
Breloom used Focus Punch!
Kingdra lost 42/48 (87%) of its health!
Breloom's Poison Heal restored health!
Breloom regained 40/321 (12%) of its health!


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Crap it is a 2HKO. I was so used to Breloom OHKOing everything not resistant to Fighting with FP and now it is barely a 2HKO. At this point, I don’t know what he will do. I fear an attack is what most likely will happen and I need to prepare for that. I don’t know how much Azelf can do to Kingdra and I don’t feel like switching in anything just yet. A sub might be impossible with Breloom. I have Breloom do a Seed Bomb because that is the safest option.

Kingdra used Rest!
Kingdra fell asleep!
Kingdra regained 48/48 (100%) of its health!
Kingdra's Chesto Berry cured its Sleep!
Breloom used Seed Bomb!
Kingdra lost 25/48 (52%) of its health!
Breloom's Poison Heal restored health!
Breloom regained 40/321 (12%) of its health!


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Crap a ChestoRest Kingdra. Now that he is fully restored, I am at a dilemma here. I decide to sack Breloom and switch in Azelf to blow itself up and kill the evil sea dragon and then send in Flygon to Outrage his brother and become king of Flygonland. Don’t worry my mushroom, you did great today.

Kingdra used Outrage!
Breloom lost 162/321 (50%) of its health!
Breloom fainted!
manav95 sent out Flygon (lvl 100 Flygon ?)!


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Damn misclick. I need to get a new mouse. Now at this point, I am freaking out. I just lost myself the match here. Flygon is probably outsped now and will die to the Outrage. Sorry Azelf, you don’t get to win here. Pokelab needs to have a better selection option. Because misclicks are about as bad as hax itself.

Kingdra used Outrage!
It's super effective!
Flygon lost 301/301 (100%) of its health!
Flygon fainted!
Kingdra became confused due to fatigue!
Kingdra became confused!
manav95 sent out Azelf (lvl 100 Azelf)!


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Crap, I was about to forfeit here and just Explode to make this seem less bad. I do some damage calcs and find that Azelf has a tiny chance of KOing this sea monster with Zen Headbutt without a Band. This was a risk I was willing to take and since Kingdra is confused, I have a shot at the win here. Please pixie come through for me here.

Azelf used Zen Headbutt!
Kingdra lost 21/48 (43%) of its health!
Kingdra is confused!
It hurt itself in confusion!
Kingdra lost 2/48 (4%) of its health!
Kingdra fainted!

@Tyranitar: crap
Tyranitar sent out Flygon (lvl 100 Flygon ?)!
Pointed stones dug into Flygon!
Flygon lost 3/48 (6%) of its health!


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Lol, Hell yeah hax gods. Well now that the retarded sea monster is dead, now I am glad that Trick didn’t play much of a role as Flygon and its Scarf would still have rampaged through this guy. I hope he doesn’t wake up though and kill my Tar weak pixie.

Azelf used Zen Headbutt!
Flygon lost 28/48 (58%) of its health!
Flygon is fast asleep.


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It was Banded after all. I don’t care because unless the hax gods screw me over with a Zen miss and Flygon waking up, I win. GG Tyranitar.


@Tyranitar: gg
Azelf used Zen Headbutt!
Flygon lost 11/48 (22%) of its health!
Flygon fainted!
manav95 wins!


Announcer: Flygon is unable to battle. The win goes to Azelf and manav95. Manav95 is the winner of the OU Shoddy Cup.
Manav95: Hell yeah Azelf, we did it. I knew that giving Heatran the rocks would save my ass a lot.
Azelf: Indeed. And no Tyranitar ever Pursuited my ass out of the match in this tourney. I feel so lucky.
Tyranitar: Damn it all. I hate to say it but manav95, you are a great trainer. I feel honored to have battled you. Now Bye.
He leaves


Winner:



Tyranitar's team:


OK lets go on to Props and Slops:

Props
Tyranitar for the battle.
Azelf for beating Flygon and Kingdra.
Trick for not having mattered that much.
Breloom for sleeping Flygon and weakening Kingdra.
Heatran for rocks and being an effective Pokemon.
Jirachi for preventing Starmie from being a threat.


Slops
Me misclicking and not getting a guaranteed win.
Suicune for getting poisoned and beaten.
Flygon for dying to a misclick.
Me not learning that Heatrans with subs can be offensive as well.
 

Athenodoros

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If something is dead, leave it to die. Especially something which was quite meh in the first place.
 

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