Electrolyte
Wouldn't Wanna Know
Thank you Haunter and Expert Physics for your help. I will try to improve the best I can. Also, the author and I discussed, and decided that Scarfed Thundurus-T was a better option; it allows him to keep a Ground immunity, and hit Celebi harder than Jolteon.
Before I post another rate, I will comment on Mylo Xyloto's rate-
Latios is a great suggestion, but because the team is situated in an 'Uber' environment Soul Dew is definitely the preffered item choice for it, now that it's allowed. Also, giving the author an idea of who to replace with Latios is a good idea- so you don't leave him on the edge and confused. In this case, a good pokemon to replace Latios with would be Garchomp- Latios covers a lot of things Garchomp does, just on the other end of the spectrum. Garchomp also significantly raised his weakness to Kyogre; Latios helps with that. Nice job, overall!
Now, time for my next rate:
Here it is
I think this is certainly one of my better rates; I felt that Terrakion really helped because of his massive weakness to Therians/Fast+Frail threats. I didn't mind letting some extra Scizor weakness slip in; Magnezone handles Scizor well, and Gliscor handles Mach Punch. I suggested SpDef Ttar because, with Scizor gone, he would need another trapper, and it also helped him with his Alakazam/Lati@s weakness.
EDIT: Avatar Korra's rate:
This is a pretty good rate; Latios is a fantastic idea however I think a better alternative to Landorus is actually Landorus-T, because of Intimidate. Sure, it doesn't outspeed +1 Salamence, however +0 Salamence can't OHKO with Outrage, and you OHKO with Stone Edge. Landorus-T also lessens his weakness to Mamoswine; who with Ice Shard/Superpower/Earthquake can 2HKO his entire team. Also, in your Cloyster, you added 4 EVs to SpA- though it didn't have any Special moves. Still, nice job! Keep up the good work!
Before I post another rate, I will comment on Mylo Xyloto's rate-
Latios is a great suggestion, but because the team is situated in an 'Uber' environment Soul Dew is definitely the preffered item choice for it, now that it's allowed. Also, giving the author an idea of who to replace with Latios is a good idea- so you don't leave him on the edge and confused. In this case, a good pokemon to replace Latios with would be Garchomp- Latios covers a lot of things Garchomp does, just on the other end of the spectrum. Garchomp also significantly raised his weakness to Kyogre; Latios helps with that. Nice job, overall!
Now, time for my next rate:
Here it is
I think this is certainly one of my better rates; I felt that Terrakion really helped because of his massive weakness to Therians/Fast+Frail threats. I didn't mind letting some extra Scizor weakness slip in; Magnezone handles Scizor well, and Gliscor handles Mach Punch. I suggested SpDef Ttar because, with Scizor gone, he would need another trapper, and it also helped him with his Alakazam/Lati@s weakness.
EDIT: Avatar Korra's rate:
This is a pretty good rate; Latios is a fantastic idea however I think a better alternative to Landorus is actually Landorus-T, because of Intimidate. Sure, it doesn't outspeed +1 Salamence, however +0 Salamence can't OHKO with Outrage, and you OHKO with Stone Edge. Landorus-T also lessens his weakness to Mamoswine; who with Ice Shard/Superpower/Earthquake can 2HKO his entire team. Also, in your Cloyster, you added 4 EVs to SpA- though it didn't have any Special moves. Still, nice job! Keep up the good work!