Warstory: Turning the tables on HO

Ok, so here's my first warstory, guys.
So I was on the suspect ladder, trying to get reqs, which I did eventually.
So I had this good match against this guy, enjoy.

Hyped Up joined.
KeldeoforOU joined.
Format:
OU (suspect test)
Hyped Up's team :
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KeldeoforOU's team :
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Ok, so I'm KeldeoforOU and I shamelessly stole an RMT to ladder with. His team definitely is HO, and I hate lead custap skarm. Not very good for me. Oh and the stupid replay shows me as the opponent, so forgive me for that.

Turn 1

The foe's Smeargle used Spore!
Skarmory fell asleep!

Skarmory is fast asleep.

Classic Smeargle strategy. I have no idea wtf to do because it might wake up and get down hazards even if I try to OHKO it :/ I don't have Spikes, and no stuff that will 2HKO skarmory and not bring it down to frigging custap range. I'll just put up my SR and switch to tran, and I can eventually set up TR and just destroy his team.

Turn 2
Hyped Up: ben gay's team?
Counterteam smh Goddammit, this is gonna be hard.

The foe's Smeargle used Stealth Rock!
Pointed stones float in the air around your team!

Obvious play is obvious. I don't have spikes on this so idk what to do.

Skarmory woke up!
Skarmory used Stealth Rock!
Pointed stones float in the air around the foe's team!

(100%)(SR) vs.
(100%)(SR)
First turn wake.......fak. This shit is gonna get up hazards, and I can't do crap. The only thing I can basically do now is spore again, however, I don't have anything to deal with this.

Turn 3

The foe's Smeargle used Spore!
Skarmory fell asleep!

Well, nothing I could've done.
Skarmory is fast asleep.
Turn 4

KeldeoforOU withdrew Smeargle!

KeldeoforOU sent out Heatran!
Pointed stones dug into the foe's Heatran!

Just need to destroy this, he knows the team so he know's it's specstran anyway.
Skarmory is fast asleep.

(100%)----->
(88%)(SR) vs.
(100%)(SR)
Turn 5

Skarmory woke up!

Skarmory used Spikes!
Spikes were scattered all around the feet of the foe's team!

.........why ;~; 2 spikes+sr will be horrible to face especially for this team. No spinner on the team and Conkeldurr will be worn down easily

The foe's Heatran used Eruption!
It's super effective! Skarmory held on thanks to Sturdy!
Skarmory lost 99.6% of its health!

(88%) (SR)vs.
(0.00001%)(SR+Spikes)
Turn 6

Skarmory ate its Custap Berry!
Skarmory's Custap Berry let it move first!

Skarmory used Spikes!
Spikes were scattered all around the feet of the foe's team!

The foe's Heatran used Eruption!
It's super effective! Skarmory lost 0.4% of its health!

Skarmory fainted!

KeldeoforOU: First turn wake :/

Classic me bitching...

Go! Kyurem-Black!
Pointed stones dug into Kyurem-Black!
Kyurem-Black is radiating a bursting aura!

(88%) (SR)vs.
(fainted)-------->
(75%)(SR+2 spikes)

Turn 7

KeldeoforOU withdrew Heatran!

KeldeoforOU sent out Cresselia!
Pointed stones dug into the foe's Cresselia!

Kyurem-Black used Earth Power!
The foe's Cresselia lost 26.6% of its health!
Kyurem-Black lost some of its HP!


For now, I go into cresselia. It's relatively bulky so it can live any attack from Kyu-B, and set up TR. Smeargle is now useless, and I can fodder it after this. Conk destroys.

(88%)------------->
(about 60%)(SR) vs.
(65%)(SR+2 spikes)
Turn 8

Kyurem-Black used Ice Beam!
The foe's Cresselia lost 37.2% of its health!
Kyurem-Black lost some of its HP!
The foe's Cresselia used Trick Room!
The foe's Cresselia twisted the dimensions!

So yeah, that hurt, but I'm alive, and still will be after SR. Also Trick Room lets me
destroy. Gonna go into smeargle now.


(about 25%)(SR) vs.
(55%)(SR+2 spikes)

Turn 9

KeldeoforOU withdrew Cresselia!

KeldeoforOU sent out Smeargle!
Pointed stones dug into the foe's Smeargle!
The foe's Smeargle is hurt by the spikes!

Kyurem-Black used Outrage!
The foe's Smeargle lost 71.3% of its health!
Kyurem-Black lost some of its HP!

The foe's Smeargle fainted!

KeldeoforOU sent out Conkeldurr!
Pointed stones dug into the foe's Conkeldurr!
The foe's Conkeldurr is hurt by the spikes!

(about 25%)--------->
(fainted)--->
(78%) vs.
(55%)
Typing the hazards is annoying, so imma stop that, anyway the setters are dead. So, I fodder smeargle since cress is v. important etc.
Turn 10

The foe's Conkeldurr used Mach Punch!

Fuck hammer miss.
It's super effective! Kyurem-Black lost 45.3% of its health!
The foe's Conkeldurr lost some of its HP!

Kyurem-Black fainted!

Go! Gengar!
Pointed stones dug into Gengar!

(68%) vs.
(fainted)---------->
(88%)
Turn 11
Ok, so I'm iron fist conk, and I can ko gengar easily, right? Gengar's bulk is kinda horrible, and conk can......
The foe's Conkeldurr used Ice Punch!
Gengar lost 85.5% of its health!
The foe's Conkeldurr lost some of its HP!

FUUUUUUUUUUUUU-----------------

Gengar used Shadow Ball!
The foe's Conkeldurr lost 50% of its health!

Gengar restored HP using its Leftovers!

(8%) vs.
(9%)
Here, if I try killing this thing, I lose conk and i basically lose. So.......

Turn 12
KeldeoforOU withdrew Conkeldurr!

KeldeoforOU sent out Porygon2!

P2 is a relatively good switch-in as it can easily stomach a focus blast to the face, and KO after setting up TR. The endgame is building slowly and this annoying asshole needs to get out of the freaking way.
The foe's Porygon2 is hurt by the spikes!
Pointed stones dug into the foe's Porygon2!
The foe's Porygon2's Download raised its Attack!

Gengar used Shadow Ball!
It doesn't affect the foe's Porygon2...

Gengar restored HP using its Leftovers!
The twisted dimensions returned to normal!

(8%)------->
(72%) vs.
(15%)

I switch to p2. Now this thing can take a hit from gengar, set up TR, and hopefully hit some crap for good damage. Now I can either sweep with specstran, or conkeldurr.

Turn 13

Gengar used Focus Blast!
It's super effective! The foe's Porygon2 lost 48.7% of its health!
The foe's Porygon2 used Trick Room!
The foe's Porygon2 twisted the dimensions!

Gengar restored HP using its Leftovers!

(23%) vs.
(21%)

No BS Focus Miss, so I can't feel bad about that. Anyway, gonna kill this nigga now, and sac p2 and hopefully utilize the rest of my turns well. I MIGHT win. But so far I haven't played too shabbily imo(maybe lead part but idk)

Turn 14

The foe's Porygon2 used Hidden Power!
Gengar lost 20.6% of its health!

HP fire is bawse, just incase Scizor comes in.

Gengar fainted!

Go! Scizor!
Pointed stones dug into Scizor!

Ok, so I can net a surprise ki.....

(23%) vs.
(fainted)------>
(88%)
Turn 15

Scizor used Bullet Punch!
A critical hit! The foe's Porygon2 lost 22.5% of its health!

I'm glad this didn't matter, one of the things I like about the match is no noticeable hax. Overkill crits smh.

The foe's Porygon2 fainted!

Nothing likes taking a bullet punch on my team except my wallbreaker.....so.....here we go

KeldeoforOU sent out Heatran!
Pointed stones dug into the foe's Heatran!
The foe's Heatran is hurt by the spikes!

(fainted)------>
(59%) vs.
(88%)

I have a pretty favorable matchup and I'm pretty damn sure I can 2HKO Latios, meaning that bar misses, this thing alone destroys.

Turn 16

Scizor used Bullet Punch!
It's not very effective... The foe's Heatran lost 10.4% of its health!

The foe's Heatran used Fire Blast!

Might miss, but yolo, eruption could potentially turn out piss weak, making me have to sac or
switch out, both of which are utter bullshit.

It's super effective! Scizor lost 87.5% of its health!

Wtf

Scizor fainted!

Go! Latios!
Pointed stones dug into Latios!

(49%) vs.
(fainted)------->
(88%)

What's the point of keeping Heatran anyway now? I now have a clear plan for a win that will most likely succeed.

Turn 17

The foe's Heatran used Fire Blast!
It's not very effective... Latios lost 51.3% of its health!

Latios used Surf!
It's super effective! The foe's Heatran lost 48.2% of its health!

The foe's Heatran fainted!
The twisted dimensions returned to normal!

Hyped Up: could hurt
KeldeoforOU: Hmm k
Hyped Up: I don't need scizor anymore
KeldeoforOU sent out Bronzong!
The foe's Bronzong is hurt by the spikes!

Heatproof bronzong ftw
Pointed stones dug into the foe's Bronzong!

(49%)------>
(78%) vs.
(37%)

Favorable matchup. Now I know I can take at least ONE hit from this, but I'm only 252 HP with no lefties, so it will hurt. If this fucking crits I will ragequit

Turn 18

Latios used Surf!
The foe's Bronzong lost 42.6% of its health!
The foe's Bronzong used Trick Room!
The foe's Bronzong twisted the dimensions!

(35%) vs.
(37%)

Pretty straightforward, I use Trick Room to execute my strategy, which you might have guessed by now.

Turn 19

The foe's Bronzong used Explosion!
The Normal Gem strengthened Explosion's power!
Latios lost 36.1% of its health!

Latios fainted!

The foe's Bronzong fainted!

Hyped Up: why do that
Go! Landorus-Therian!
Pointed stones dug into Landorus-Therian!

KeldeoforOU sent out Cresselia!
Pointed stones dug into the foe's Cresselia!
Landorus-Therian intimidates the foe's Cresselia!
The foe's Cresselia's Attack fell!

(fainted)----->
(12%) vs.
(fainted)------>
(88%)


BOOM MADAFAKA So yeah.

Turn 20

The foe's Cresselia used Lunar Dance!

The foe's Cresselia fainted!

Landorus-Therian used Stone Edge!
But there was no target...

Landorus-Therian restored HP using its Leftovers!

KeldeoforOU sent out Conkeldurr!
The foe's Conkeldurr became cloaked in mystical moonlight!
The foe's Conkeldurr is hurt by the spikes!
Pointed stones dug into the foe's Conkeldurr!

(12%, Lunar Dances)------>
(78%) vs.
(94%)

The crux of my strategy, this freaking move wins games. Period.

Turn 21

The foe's Conkeldurr used Ice Punch!
It's super effective! Landorus-Therian lost 93.7% of its health!
The foe's Conkeldurr lost some of its HP!

Landorus-Therian fainted!
(68%) vs.
(fainted)
KeldeoforOU won the battle!
Ladder updating...
Hyped Up's rating: 2082 → 2031
(-51 for losing)
KeldeoforOU's rating: 1922 → 1953
(+31 for winning)

Ben gay's TR team is like the only team I can ladder with, though day by day I get better. I've gotten reqs, and this battle is half a month or a full month old or so. I hope you enjoyed this, etc etc. Also about the formatting, if anyone has suggestions, please tell me.
Also my opponent said his name on smogon was The Tyranitar
This is my first warstory, and my hands hurt :(
 
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Ben Gay's team is super gay. Well done, but fucking kudos to Hyped Up / The Tyranitar for stuffing Heatran cold, I've lost every time I've played Ben because of that Heatran. Well, maybe not cold, but he didn't get lolswept by Sun-boosted Eruption like I've been done.
 
Ben Gay's team is super gay. Well done, but fucking kudos to Hyped Up / The Tyranitar for stuffing Heatran cold, I've lost every time I've played Ben because of that Heatran. Well, maybe not cold, but he didn't get lolswept by Sun-boosted Eruption like I've been done.
lol, I've swept with Heatran before. Anyway, the best thing I like about this match is that it has absolutely no significant hax and I made good plays. It was rather straightforward and short too. :)
 

Stone RG

Megas are broke
I liked the match a lot tbh, mainly because of the teams, but the comentary was lacking, which isnt really your fault since there really isnt too much to add. I couldve read the log and still undestood all the plays. Props for conk showing he roarngly shits on HO w/ trick room up and downs for your opp for sacking sciz, which couldve theorically helped him with a sucession of prediction, and made the match better overall.

10/10 on cool teams
2/10 on match
given as how you didnt have that much to comment on: 8/10 on commentary
 
I liked the match a lot tbh, mainly because of the teams, but the comentary was lacking, which isnt really your fault since there really isnt too much to add. I couldve read the log and still undestood all the plays. Props for conk showing he roarngly shits on HO w/ trick room up and downs for your opp for sacking sciz, which couldve theorically helped him with a sucession of prediction, and made the match better overall.

10/10 on cool teams
2/10 on match
given as how you didnt have that much to comment on: 8/10 on commentary
Thanks!
Also I was very tired, might add more commentary later
 

ginganinja

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This warstory was ok, but it sorta lacked tension, and awesome plays that would make it a really great warstory. The battle limited this somewhat, since it was basically, sac x, send in y to TR, kill shit with Z, rinse and repeat. There wasn't any amazing predictions which involve your reader a little more.

Anyway, its something to keep in mind for a future warstory, we need more warstorys anyway and this was a good first effort
 
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Thanks, ginga. The only unfortunate thing is that I don't remember any good battles I had, and the ladder is.......bad. So ehh idk
 
Nice strong warstory dor Kingler! Comments were lacking imo, but the battle was decent and the teams awaesome! Over all 7/10
 

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