This is a cartoon I made; how is it?
 

My friend and I wrote, directed, and animated our own cartoon starring our character, the Monocle Ape. I was wondering if I could get a little feedback on it - whether it's good, what can be improved, and what you like. Any and all criticism is welcome. Thanks!

Haha, nice. The biggest thing I felt was an issue was your guys' mic which definitely made it sound a little bad. Definitely look into getting a good one maybe?? :o

We actually have a studio grade one, the sound effect we used for the washing machines in the background was a really rushed and poor choice though so everyone things it's the mic haha.

Glad you enjoyed it though!

This is a lock I did, how is it?




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not bad but youtube thread for single videos