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Superimp Jul 7th, 2012 11:14:38 AM

Arceus (Update) (QC 3/3)
 
Credit goes to Fireburn for the original analysis and Poppy for the previous WIP update. Thanks!

STATUS REPORT:
Revamping my previous work on Wallceus's AC.
OVERALL NOTES:
NOTES WITH PREVIOUS STATUS REPORTS

UPDATE ANALYSIS NOTES:
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QC checks: shrang, barry4ever, Poppy [3/3]
GP checks
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Furai Jul 7th, 2012 12:24:33 PM

Use this. It's already Q/Ced and all it needs is a write-up.

Nexus Jul 7th, 2012 12:41:05 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fat Furai (Post 4308865)
Use this. It's already Q/Ced and all it needs is a write-up.

Already asked me if he could use it and I told him yes noob furry -__-

Superimp Jul 7th, 2012 1:18:52 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fat Nexus (Post 4308891)
Already asked me if he could use it and I told him yes noob furry -__-

It's fine Nexus ;). Though I did mention it was likely I would use Poppy's stuff in the first post, I haven't exactly placed his stuff in yet. In fact, the link Furai provided will prove most useful in this task as I won't have to look inside the Locked / Outdated Analyses section as much. Anyway, thank you both for letting me use this stuff as well as giving an easily accessible link. Really appreciate it.

NOTE: I'm assuming the QC checks will still hold true if I use Poppy's stuff? Or will it need new QC checks? Thanks.

Furai Jul 7th, 2012 1:28:50 PM

Unless BW got it something extrmely useful, or something else can now defeat it, I think they still hold. And fuck you Nexsux gtfo I didn't know he just posted a skeleton

Superimp Jul 7th, 2012 2:34:48 PM

Massive Update to First Post
 
Thanks Furai for the prompt response about QC checks! On that note, Poppy's stuff has now been added to the first post. Still, new information might be necessary because of the metagame shift (EX: Multiscale Lugia). Thus, QC checks are tentatively placed in the title. This will be changed if the Ubers QC team feels new QC checks are required.

If you feel something is missing from this analysis, please post!

EDIT: The QC checks were previously from:

- Poppy
- barry4ever
- shrang

Could you please reconfirm these/all QC checks so that this analysis can enter the "Copyediting" stage? If not, could someone else on the QC team check? Or are any major additions necessary? Thanks.

shrang Jul 8th, 2012 1:31:14 AM

This looks fine, just make sure you gear the analysis towards Black and White 2 by mentioning how it fares against the new threats. A couple of small things:

- Mention Landorus-T in Checks and Counters for ExtremeKiller. Yes, it is quite a flimsy check, but at full health, it can take a +1 ExtremeSpeed (thanks to Intimidate) and deal a truckload of damage with Choice Banded Superpower, much like Scizor can. Mention how Intimidate is helpful in dealing with ExtremeKiller in general.
- Mention Gengar as well for an ExtremeKiller check. Again, it is pretty flimsy, but you are immune to ExtremeSpeed and can deal quite a bit of damage with Focus Blast (if it hits). Choice Scarf Gengar outspeeds all ExtremeKiller variants, while SubDisable can, with some prediction, beat slower variants.

Otherwise, I'll stamp this again. QC APPROVED 1/3

Theorymon Jul 8th, 2012 1:52:51 AM

I think a CB set should be added, but only as the last set AND it has to have Trick. The set being

ExtremeSpeed
Trick
Earthquake/Shadow Claw
Swords Dance / Shadow Claw

revenging stuff with ExtremeSpeed is nice and all, but the real point of this set is that a lot of Arceus switch ins like Giratina, Lugia, and Skarmory REALLY hate getting tricked a Choice Band (and of course teammates should reflect this). The tough part is coverage moves... if you use Swords Dance and Earthquake, it does fine but it 100% loses to Giratina-O, but if you use Shadow Claw, you won't get past Steels. If you value coverage more than sweeping power, then you can nix SD for Shadow Claw. So generally this isn't going to sweep as well as regular SD Arceus, but it deserves a set just because its a decent lure, and of course CB ExtremeSpeed can save you in a pinch against some offensive stuff (I'll get calcs later if you need that). Otherwise... Arceus didn't really change much!

Poppy Jul 8th, 2012 9:13:19 AM

emphasise flimsy for that lando-t being a check...
scarf gengar with destiny bond is a decent check, subdisable is tough because jolly variants outspeed and smart players will outspeed disable with extremespeed so they can continue attacking with shadow claw

add in tmon's trick set, it's good

then you'll get my stamp

Superimp Jul 8th, 2012 9:55:12 PM

The analysis has now been updated with Theorymon's Choice Band set. Intimidate and the new threats of BW2 are mentioned. Landorus-T and Gengar remain controversial as checks to Extreme Killer, see Checks/Counters section in the first post for more details. This should hopefully be the last of any significant changes.

Could QC please check the Choice Band set and the Checks/Counters in detail? Thanks.

EDIT: Could someone post after Post #12 please, I would rather not double post. Thanks.

Mr.lol Jul 8th, 2012 10:18:39 PM

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Shadow Force to be deslashed and put into AC? Or should it stay slashed? Right now, it's slashed. Shadow Force DOES have obscene power though... It's still used a fair bit according to Moveset Analysis.
Ok just to clear this up BEFORE you start writing, the reason why Shadow Force should be even considered over Shadow Claw is NOT because of the humongous power boost, nay. Unless your using it with Power Herb, Shadow Force's MAIN USE IS TO TAKE THAT EXTRA POISON TURN AND TAKE ADVANTAGE OF TOXIC SPIKES.It allows Arceus to evade a WoW from Gira-a, then strike back after its taken a tad bit of residual damage, which can actually be lethal, if toxic spikes aren't present Gira-a GAINS Leftovers instead, Lugia can Reflect. If its going in AC make sure you mention that, because I have a feeling that everyone forgot that -_-. Also emphasize in AC that one Shadow Force is weaker then two Shadow Claws, warn of using it at all costs unless you have Toxic Spikes support. <- Yes I just rewrote the same statement twice in different words and bolded it, ITS THAT IMPORTANT.

Also mention Kabutops and Omastar as checks to the ExtremeKiller set since they can come in to Extremekiller as it Swords Dances, and then OHKO it next turn with a Superpower / Low Kick (Kabutops) and Hydro Pump (Omastar). Both of them don't really care about ExtremeSpeed due to respectable defenses and a resist given courtesy of typing, and they outspeed due to swift swim :D. I normally wouldn't bother to mention these things but if we are mentioning things like Gengar...... yeah...

EDIT: TO THE POST BELOW MINE, two Shadow Claws already have greater power then a Shadow Force, so really those calcs are slightly unimportant. The only important one is the wobba one, the others, Arceus can just shadow claw twice and not risk hitting Chansey instead. Lugia sets up reflect anyway on the turn it dissapears (lol).

EDIT2: DIRECTED TO THE EDIT OF THE POST BELOW MINE, well after Gira-a gets that one turn of leftovers its no longer always OHKOed :(, and like I said Lugia can Reflect. So those calcs are a bit iffy too :(.

Also
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Concerning Gengar, I would be inclined to agree with you. Gengar is not exactly the ideal Pokemon to use in Ubers.
BEST EUPHEMISM ever <- do not read with Sardonic tone, that literally was THE BEST EUPHEMISM EVER :D. In other words, this is a compliment, not an offensive statement.

EDIT 3: It won't even always OHKO Gira-a after lefties and rocks all the time. That and the chances of it landing are slim.
Also a reply to you :P
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EDIT 4: Yeah the comments are fine now :P. EDIT WARS are fun, although I think people are going wth is this lol. Thanks for the color info :D, yes I was R-spin.

Superimp Jul 8th, 2012 10:58:25 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fat Mr.lol (Post 4311263)
Ok just to clear this up BEFORE you start writing, the reason why Shadow Force should be even considered over Shadow Claw is NOT because of the humongous power boost, nay. Unless your using it with Power Herb, Shadow Force's MAIN USE IS TO TAKE THAT EXTRA POISON TURN AND TAKE ADVANTAGE OF TOXIC SPIKES.It allows Arceus to evade a WoW from Gira-a, then strike back after its taken a tad bit of residual damage, which can actually be lethal, if toxic spikes aren't present Gira-a GAINS Leftovers instead, Lugia can Reflect. If its going in AC make sure you mention that, because I have a feeling that everyone forgot that -_-. Also emphasize in AC that one Shadow Force is weaker then two Shadow Claws, warn of using it at all costs unless you have Toxic Spikes support. <- Yes I just rewrote the same statement twice in different words and bolded it, ITS THAT IMPORTANT.

Also mention Kabutops and Omastar as checks to the ExtremeKiller set since they can come in to Extremekiller as it Swords Dances, and then OHKO it next turn with a Superpower / Low Kick (Kabutops) and Hydro Pump (Omastar). Both of them don't really care about ExtremeSpeed due to respectable defenses and a resist given courtesy of typing, and they outspeed due to swift swim :D. I normally wouldn't bother to mention these things but if we are mentioning things like Gengar...... yeah...

What you have said about Shadow Force is certainly quite true. The power is still important though as it alleviates Wobbuffet concerns and stands a respectable chance at OHKOing Giratina and Lugia after SR with Life Orb, SD, and Adamant. He also easily OHKOs Physically Defensive Giratina-O with Life Orb (Adamant guaranteed, Jolly 50%). Actually, Shadow Force might be good enough due to all these points and yours to stay as a slash despite its charge turn. Thanks for your points Mr.lol, I'll be sure to use them for Shadow Force.

SS Kabutops and Omastar are certainly checks. That's why they were already mentioned. However, what you have given definitely shows that they are checks.

Concerning Gengar, I would be inclined to agree with you. Gengar is not exactly the ideal Pokemon to use in Ubers. But then again, Gengar could be annoying to Extreme Killer, however flimsy (and rare) it may be. QC? Should Gengar be seriously mentioned? Thanks.

EDIT: Because they are possible OHKOs, they are important. After a Swords Dance, the turns that come after do matter. For instance, using Shadow Claw twice leaves you vulnerable to Will-O-Wisp, Roar, and assorted. Shadow Force allows you to avoid those and possibly OHKO Giratina, Lugia, etc. If they switch, Shadow Force will damage whatever comes in. However, it helps to get rid of any Normal-type Pokemon if applicable like you said before beginning a serious sweep.

Concerning Shadow Force (without Power Herb), it does better against Giratina, not Lugia. As you are fully aware of, Lugia has Reflect and also Multiscale.

EDIT 2:

Reply to Mr.lol


If I could leave you with one thought after you read the reply, it's this:
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EDIT 3:

You are correct. Like you and I said, the OHKO is a possibility, a chance. It is still respectable though. For your case of SR and Leftovers, there is a 31.25% chance of Arceus OHKOing Giratina (Great Wall) with a +2 Adamant Life Orb Shadow Force (Check the first damage calculation of Edit 2 for source). This does not include chance of crits.

I probably should have made the first damage calculation more explicit in referring to SR and Leftovers. Remember, Giratina switching into SR and two turns of Leftovers is essentially the same as switching into no SR.

Again, it is important to note that other stuff like Spikes, Toxic Spikes (Which you mentioned), previous damage on Giratina, etc. significantly increases the chance of an OHKO. For instance, SR and 1 layer of Spikes essentially guarantees an OHKO. Shadow Force is a fine option against Giratina (and others) when used properly.

About your log, it does not seem to showcase Shadow Force in its best light. In fact, it doesn't even show Extreme Killer in a good light. The individual who used Extreme Killer seemed to use Him very early in the game, clearly evident by the turn count. When facing a team as defensive as that, it might prove useful to weaken it a bit before sending out Extreme Killer. I assume you were R-spin?

If you want colors, just use this:
[COLOR=Insert Hex Color]Insert Text Here[/COLOR].

To be honest, I just copied one of my many test logs (Logs which are testing Shadow Force's performance against Giratina and vice versa) and pasted it here. Seemed to work fine for me.

NOTE: I'll be sure to use the points gathered during this discussion for Shadow Force! Right now, I'm leaning towards keeping it as a second slash, but with lots of comments in AC about its advantages/disadvantages over Shadow Claw. Thanks.

EDIT 4: Check the first post of this thread for my planned comments on Shadow Force. Are these suitable?

Furai Jul 11th, 2012 5:01:51 PM

Choice Band set looks good.

Checks and Counters looks good, put a mention of Bronzong there. I am SO iffy on Sableye and Gengar, they are a total fail in Ubers. If you do mention them, be sure to mention they suck, as much as I love Sableye.

Poppy Jul 12th, 2012 5:24:39 AM

scarf gengar is a better check than most might think, scarf, let alone destiny bond is quite a rare sight. although, traditionally we don't rely on 'surprise' factor as a measure of effectiveness so i want more experienced members of QC to weigh in here; however, i am leaning towards mentioning this as a 'decent check, but if arceus doesn't attack you've most likely lost.'

bronzong can only toxic so just make sure you say that (i don't even know why you would mention it though, since forretress basically does the same thing)

i would actually put fighting arceus at number 6, with max special attack it has a good chance at OHKOing most extremekiller, whereas scarf dialga / heatran need substantial residual, omastar and kabutops need less residual but are rain reliant and omastar can only use hydro pump.

firecape Jul 12th, 2012 1:51:11 PM

I'm hesitant about calling Skarmory a counter. I mean, it can phase it out, but it doesn't really pose an immediate threat. Brave Bird takes like 1/4th of Arceus's HP, while +2 ExtremeSpeed does 35.92 - 41.91% to SpD Skarmory. +6 ExtremeSpeed does 71.25 - 84.13%. I mean its a very solid check, but if Extreme Killer is the last mon you can't really count on Skarmory unless you are running something weird like Toxic Skarmory or have Toxic Spikes support and you can phase it out after/if it used a Lum Berry.

Superimp Jul 12th, 2012 3:14:04 PM

Replies to Recent Posters
 
Here are my replies to Furai, Poppy, and firecape.

Replying to Furai:
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Replying to Poppy:
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Replying to firecape:
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I'll post my test results for Checks / Counters later after I finished testing Physically Defensive Ho-Oh and CB Metagross. Are there any more possible "checks" you would like me to test (Preferably something which won't waste my time)? Thanks.

shrang Jul 13th, 2012 9:04:28 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fat Poppy (Post 4310092)
emphasise flimsy for that lando-t being a check...
scarf gengar with destiny bond is a decent check, subdisable is tough because jolly variants outspeed and smart players will outspeed disable with extremespeed so they can continue attacking with shadow claw

add in tmon's trick set, it's good

then you'll get my stamp

Just saying, it's actually not that easy to get Gengar to Disable ExtremeSpeed. Once Arceus breaks the Sub with Shadow Claw, the best move on Gengar is actually to Sub again. Basically, you follow this flow-chart:

1) Gengar uses Sub

V

2) Arceus uses Shadow Claw, Sub broken -> Use Disable to Disable Shadow Claw

V

3) Gengar uses Sub -> Arceus uses Shadow Claw -> Go back to stage 2

V

Arceus uses ExtremeSpeed -> Spam Focus Blast

You generally have 4-5 Substitutes you can actually make against a slow Arceus. That's 4-5 chances you'll get the mind-game of Disable vs Substitute correct. Those aren't bad odds, IMO.

Poppy Jul 15th, 2012 10:57:13 AM

i'm probably a bit biased against bronzong because i think it's worthless but i do realize its immunity to EQ makes it a better check than forretress

skarm often carries toxic in ubers so it's definitely more of a counter than a check

this gengar argument is ridiculous and i'm satsified with leaving gengar as some sort situational check or just not mentioning it at all

the fighting arceus set i'm actually getting at is 240 hp 252 spa 16 spe modest which i used as my extremekiller check for a few teams. so you can just mention that fighting areus is a good check but needs bulk and maximum special attack to be reliable.

i do take your point about obscure checks so i do think it should stop here

don't mention sableye it's shit

forretress should have pain split as a primary option but that's another story entirely (another update for me to get onto)

edit: you need to pair physically defensive ho-oh with gira-o/a or ghost arceus with roar or WoW to beat arceus. that ho-oh's main purpose is to take one extremespeed and attempt to burn it then switch out to something else that can handle burned arceus.

barry4ever Jul 19th, 2012 7:54:39 AM

I guess its fine if you mention Gengar just stick it at the bottom of the pile with Landorus-T and co, to be used as a last resort check if you have no other alternative (seriously) No to CB Metagross. Seriously, why are we mentioning these stuff anyway. Its not like they ever get used in Ubers anyway. Doesnt make a difference I guess. This analysis looks good otherwise, the transition for Arceus to b/w2 was pretty smooth i guess.

QC Approved 2/3

Superimp Jul 26th, 2012 3:59:28 PM

Replies to Recent Posters
 
Here are my replies to shrang, Poppy, and barry4ever.

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Since the Checks / Counters section seems to be fine for Extreme Killer now, I’ll just post any test results on request.

Is this analysis update ready for the last QC check? Or is there some last issue which has to be addressed? An example might include the Checks / Counters for Wallceus (Personally, I think it needs a touch more revamp. Thoughts?). Thanks.

Furai Apr 1st, 2013 8:49:34 AM

Fire Blast > Overheat, AC of E-Killer


This is super serious and not related in any way to April Fools, js.


EDIT: Sableye should be mentioned as a counter to non-Fire Blast Extreme Killer and Choice Band Arceus if it gets tricked on

MatchMaster Apr 3rd, 2013 5:26:08 PM

If no one minds, I'd like to suggest at least a mention of an EV spread of 49 HP / 252 Atk / 207 Spe with an Adamant Nature. This allows Arceus to just outpace Genesect, who you can't kill with ExtremeSpeed even if you're at +2 and Genesect is running a hasty nature, and Genesect is quite popular.

jackm Apr 3rd, 2013 8:38:40 PM

Well, Genesect is usually a scarf variant, which means Arceus has no hope of outrunning it. Besides, even scarf Genesect doesn't pose a massive threat to EK on its own.

Superimp Apr 12th, 2013 4:55:35 PM

Here are my replies to Poppy, MatchMaster, and Furai.

Replying to Poppy:

Quote:

CONTEXT: Poppy originally had a post that contained the final QC check as well as a quick comment about how mentioning Physically Defensive Ho-Oh was optional based on the length of the C&C section for Extreme Killer. However, he then neared his 2000th post...
Thanks for the QC check Poppy! As of the moment, I’m probably not going to specifically mention Physically Defensive Ho-Oh as the C&C section is huge enough as it is.

Replying to MatchMaster:

As jackm previously mentioned (Thanks for that by the way), the Genesect Speed benchmark isn’t really that notable given that Genesect is usually Choice Scarf (~77% usage as of March). However, you’re more then welcome to invest enough Speed to outspeed non-Choice Scarf Genesect if that is what you desire. In fact, such Speed investment could prove useful against Choice Band Genesect (~4% usage as of March) given that an unboosted Explosion can deal considerable damage:

Quote:

252 Atk Choice Band Genesect Explosion vs. 240 HP / 0 Def Arceus-Normal: 329-388 (74.6 - 87.98%)
Hope this addresses your suggestion MatchMaster.

Replying to Furai:
OVERHEAT VS FIRE BLAST: WHICH IS BETTER?

To answer your concerns Furai over Overheat versus Fire Blast, I will be analyzing the relevant matchups where Overheat / Fire Blast can have a real and tangible effect against possible answers. All damage calculations have been obtained from Honkalculator 4000 unless manual calculation was required (i.e. calculations involving -2 SpA drops from Overheat, combination of attacks, etc.). Your Sableye concerns have been addressed in its respective section.

NOTE: Silk Scarf (or any item besides Life Orb like Lum Berry or Leftovers) Fire Blast assumes a neutral SpA nature. Silk Scarf (or any item including Life Orb) Overheat assumes a SpA lowering nature.

1. SKARMORY
EXCLUSIVE TO NON-RAIN: Life Orb Overheat > Life Orb Fire Blast > Silk Scarf Fire Blast > Silk Scarf Overheat

2. SABLEYE (its special bulk is paltry; even with 252 HP / 4 SpD EVs, its special bulk is around Froslass level)
EXCLUSIVE TO SUN: Life Orb Overheat > Life Orb Fire Blast > Silk Scarf Fire Blast >>> Silk Scarf Overheat

3. BRONZONG (Levitate of course)
EXCLUSIVE TO NON-RAIN: Life Orb Overheat > Life Orb Fire Blast > Silk Scarf Fire Blast > Silk Scarf Overheat

4. FERROTHORN
Life Orb Fire Blast > Life Orb Overheat > Silk Scarf Fire Blast > Silk Scarf Overheat

5. FORRETRESS
Life Orb Fire Blast = Silk Scarf Fire Blast >>> Life Orb Overheat > Silk Scarf Overheat

6. CHOICE BAND SCIZOR (Make sure to read the note at the end)*
Life Orb Overheat > Life Orb Fire Blast >>> Silk Scarf Fire Blast > Silk Scarf Overheat

SUMMARY:
  1. If you’re using Life Orb, go with Overheat. Best way of taking down Skarmory, Sableye, Bronzong, and Choice Band Scizor. It also has 90% accuracy. However, if you’re more concerned with Ferrothorn and Forretress, Fire Blast is better as it does consistent damage under rain (However, Ferrothorn is still iffy and 85% accuracy could be better).
  2. If you’re using Silk Scarf (or any item besides Life Orb like Lum Berry or Leftovers), go with Fire Blast. Make sure to have a neutral SpA nature too (Even though it will lower bulk).
  3. Overheat without Life Orb sucks (at least relative to the other options). A neutral SpA nature might work, but the damage is roughly equivalent to Life Orb Fire Blast, just minus some bulk and the consistent damage.
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I’ll see what I can do about a specific mention for Fire Blast given its increased utility against threats such as Ferrothorn and Forretress. This has been somewhat addressed by previous notes, but mentioning Fire Blast probably won’t hurt.

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Originally Posted by Fat Update Analysis Notes
- Overheat is mentioned as being useful against Skarmory, but not (as useful) against Forretress and Ferrothorn

Item clarifications (i.e. Life Orb works best with Overheat, any other item works best with Fire Blast, etc.) will be mentioned if length permits.

Thanks for your suggestion Furai!

shrang Apr 12th, 2013 9:20:09 PM

Quote:

Choice Band Landorus-T (He works much better here than against Extreme Killer) can switch into any move (ExtremeSpeed still hurts though; it can possibly 2HKO after SR). Trick doesn't matter for obvious reasons. Superpower only revenges somewhat weakened ones. Unable to heal.
Just a tiny note, I know that you've addressed Landorus-T before, but this bit needs a small correction. Assuming Stealth Rock is up on both sides, Landorus-T will always survive an Adamant +1 LO ExtremeSpeed at full health (minus SR), while Superpower will always OHKO 240 HP Extreme Killer. Superpower does 90.25% - 106.35%, while +1 LO ES does 74.40% - 87.47% (No chance at all to OHKO Landorus-T at full health with one round of SR). It's an extremely shaky counter, sure, but you do have that one-off stop to Extreme Killer if you're at full health.

Just another more important thing. I know and appreciate the fact that you take great pride and detail in your analyses, but try to make sure this analysis is done in shorter time than Latias's analysis (much shorter). Don't bother going into detail that is unnecessary. We don't want to wait 6 months for an analysis (albeit comprehensive) again, please!


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