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Phatmon66 Jan 14th, 2013 9:31:11 AM

Phatmon's Artistic thread of pokemon and other things
 
Hello My name is phatmon monstraros AKA phatmon66. I hope you all like my artwork and constructive criticism is welcomed. Thank you

Fennekin's fake form, fakemon not mine art is though:
http://24.media.tumblr.com/dd0d252ab...3ma3o1_400.jpg

froakie's fake form, art is mine form isn't:
http://25.media.tumblr.com/f827086ee...3ma3o1_500.jpg

Xerneas and Yveltal the showdown of the legends part 1:
https://sphotos-a.xx.fbcdn.net/hphot...66383576_n.jpg

Battle of the 6 gen starters!
https://sphotos-a.xx.fbcdn.net/hphot...84992848_n.jpg

Zoroark in lostlorn forest
https://sphotos-b.xx.fbcdn.net/hphot...51824550_n.jpg

SnowPeashooters Jan 14th, 2013 9:46:37 AM

These are fantastic! I always love drawings that have a painty effect and yours are just TTM. The colours are done pretty masterfully.

Take note of your composition and use of empty space though. The third picture is too biased towards the left side. I suggest you darken the Auraspherish thing that Yvelta is holding to draw more attention towards the center/right.

Phatmon66 Jan 14th, 2013 9:48:37 AM

O k I'll do that thank you :) for the feedback! and im glad you like the art!

Danmire Jan 14th, 2013 9:49:54 AM

Woah there, you got some pretty cool stuff, man! But try not to post each of you art work every second in a different post! Merge them with your original post, that way it's easier to see everything else and you won't get in trouble.

Phatmon66 Jan 14th, 2013 9:54:20 AM

ok but um how do i merge it altogether? and thank you :) i'm new at this lol

Zracknel Jan 14th, 2013 10:04:20 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fat Phatmon66 (Post 4540577)
ok but um how do i merge it altogether? and thank you :) i'm new at this lol

Welcome to smeargle's studio~

I've taken care of the post-merging; all of your art is now in your original post

from here on out you can post new art pieces as separate posts-- most artists just tend to stick a bunch in their first post for simplicity's sake

Phatmon66 Jan 14th, 2013 10:23:44 AM

thank you :) i think im getting the hang of this.

Juicy Fruit Jan 14th, 2013 12:39:06 PM

Your use of lighting and dynamic is fantastic, keep it up!

+luvdisc

Phatmon66 Jan 16th, 2013 2:25:10 PM

benevolence vs Maliciousness and fanart of a fake Chespin evolution
 
https://sphotos-b.xx.fbcdn.net/hphot...22995407_n.jpg

https://sphotos-a.xx.fbcdn.net/hphot...83484492_n.jpg

Phatmon66 Jan 31st, 2013 3:39:57 PM

White Kyuremhttps://sphotos-b.xx.fbcdn.net/hphot...97956784_n.jpg
Wrath of Hydreigonhttp://fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/f/20...66-d5cil02.png
Black Charizard vs Flamedramonhttp://fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/f/20...66-d5744v5.png
Chespinhttp://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/f/20...66-d5sxa1n.jpg
Therian Forme Thundurushttp://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/f/20...66-d5iubq1.png

Kadew Jan 31st, 2013 4:25:00 PM

Wow this is some fine painting, I love your use of color and light. You bring out some very vibrant hues with nice dramatic lighting, but the color schemes don't get muddled or clashing much at all. I only wish I had that kind of handle on color or lighting. The charizard pic in particular, I like how 'zard's form is very clearly defined despite only being a silhouette with a few border highlights. I also like how you rendered the lightning on thundurus, it is simple but it clearly conveys "lightning" instead of "random white squiggles."

In terms of what could be improved on, critique below if you are interested.
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Juicy Fruit Jan 31st, 2013 5:32:38 PM

Well, Kadew has done a fantastic job of outlining some of the flaws in your work - not that there are really that many to point out in the first place!
I just wanted to expand on his advice slightly.

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Hope this helps.


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