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Phatmon's Artistic thread of pokemon and other things
Hello My name is phatmon monstraros AKA phatmon66. I hope you all like my artwork and constructive criticism is welcomed. Thank you
Fennekin's fake form, fakemon not mine art is though: http://24.media.tumblr.com/dd0d252ab...3ma3o1_400.jpg froakie's fake form, art is mine form isn't: http://25.media.tumblr.com/f827086ee...3ma3o1_500.jpg Xerneas and Yveltal the showdown of the legends part 1: https://sphotos-a.xx.fbcdn.net/hphot...66383576_n.jpg Battle of the 6 gen starters! https://sphotos-a.xx.fbcdn.net/hphot...84992848_n.jpg Zoroark in lostlorn forest https://sphotos-b.xx.fbcdn.net/hphot...51824550_n.jpg |
These are fantastic! I always love drawings that have a painty effect and yours are just TTM. The colours are done pretty masterfully.
Take note of your composition and use of empty space though. The third picture is too biased towards the left side. I suggest you darken the Auraspherish thing that Yvelta is holding to draw more attention towards the center/right. |
O k I'll do that thank you :) for the feedback! and im glad you like the art!
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Woah there, you got some pretty cool stuff, man! But try not to post each of you art work every second in a different post! Merge them with your original post, that way it's easier to see everything else and you won't get in trouble.
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ok but um how do i merge it altogether? and thank you :) i'm new at this lol
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I've taken care of the post-merging; all of your art is now in your original post from here on out you can post new art pieces as separate posts-- most artists just tend to stick a bunch in their first post for simplicity's sake |
thank you :) i think im getting the hang of this.
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Your use of lighting and dynamic is fantastic, keep it up!
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benevolence vs Maliciousness and fanart of a fake Chespin evolution
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White Kyuremhttps://sphotos-b.xx.fbcdn.net/hphot...97956784_n.jpg
Wrath of Hydreigonhttp://fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/f/20...66-d5cil02.png Black Charizard vs Flamedramonhttp://fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/f/20...66-d5744v5.png Chespinhttp://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/f/20...66-d5sxa1n.jpg Therian Forme Thundurushttp://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/f/20...66-d5iubq1.png |
Wow this is some fine painting, I love your use of color and light. You bring out some very vibrant hues with nice dramatic lighting, but the color schemes don't get muddled or clashing much at all. I only wish I had that kind of handle on color or lighting. The charizard pic in particular, I like how 'zard's form is very clearly defined despite only being a silhouette with a few border highlights. I also like how you rendered the lightning on thundurus, it is simple but it clearly conveys "lightning" instead of "random white squiggles."
In terms of what could be improved on, critique below if you are interested.
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Well, Kadew has done a fantastic job of outlining some of the flaws in your work - not that there are really that many to point out in the first place!
I just wanted to expand on his advice slightly.
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Hope this helps. |
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