not sure how often or whether you'd even check the writing thread for feedback, but just wanted to drop by to say your poetry work is awesome!! they're just the right mix of cryptic and punchy - i especially love the song; reminded me a lot of early days Jason Mraz. aaanyway yeah (obviously >_<) not a literary critic by any stretch haha so all I can say is 'loved it, would be so great to see more from you' :D