Alright, this is what I got so far:
I tried to incorporate as much of your requests that I remembered that I could. I wasn't able to get the Karate Man's hair (His posture is too far back to pinch the hair). Anyways, what do you think? There's also a non-scratched version, here:
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Either way, give me some of that criticism and I'll try hard to work it into it. Or scrap the whole thing, but I'll try to get it all done as a Christmas present. No idea why, though.