Sure, I can look it over. I'm not really an RU player though, so you should also ask users like Incon and Zebraiken for their rates. I will say that you can add things to your descriptions like: why you chose a particular Pokemon over a similar Pokemon, why you chose that particular moveset/item/ability, what threats do you have trouble with, how much testing have you done with the team, what is the main theme of the team, what is your main sweeper, etc. There are many things you can include in your descriptions. Remember, the more you explain, the more help you can recieve. :)