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And yea, technical stuff; it's just kinda hard for me to focus on that when large parts of the writing genuinely need touching up (i mean, you made a lotta changes too, so you must agree with me there
Either way thanks for everything and i'm sure this isn't the last time i'll be saying it.
can u give this a post GP check on the Moves and Set Details section of the first set, as well as OO? I made some update and i wanna be sure i didnt fuck up grammar wise. thanks =]