Hey, over at Shinx, I'm kinda worried about the content of the analysis. It has 2 GP checks, yet both of them failed to correct any matter of content at all. For example, Overview's "second paragraph" just stops flat. Okay, it has a weak STAB attack, then it blanks. What I'm aiming for here is just a wrap-up sentence at this part.
Also, two sentence "paragraphs". These are seen at Intimidate + Twave's AC and TO's second paragraph. They need more context. What else could like paralysis support? What about benefiting from Shinx's offensive prowess? And for TO, why do endgame sweepers work well with Shinx? What does Shinx do to make endgame sweepers tick? You also forgot to remove a comment from a GPer (you can see a (comma) sticking out) at Int + Twave's AC. Explain the EV spreads for both sets in-depth in another paragraph too. I'll check again later. Stupid limit here.