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This is wonderful
Writing wise, this is good
Do you think you could also talk about the history behind Zygarde's sets? Initially, Dragon Dance was all the rage, but it's more or less fallen out...
I wouldn't really call it a "good" sweeper, since it's pretty niche and kind of hard to use. I think "dangerous" is more accurate.
Probably worth mentioning Steam Eruption by name, since it's one the best reasons to use Volcanion.
You should mention its many weaknesses...
Combine the first two lines together
The 4th line isn't accurate. Mimikyu can clean because of its Swords Dance in conjunction with its...
I think Expert Belt probably warrants mentioning in Set Details or OO. Bluffing a choice set is great, though V-create ends up being much weaker as a...
You don't need to tell the reader what Spore does. Simply mentioning it should be enough.
Keep in mind it does around 60% to Tapu Lele switching out, so you should mention Latios instead.
I'd change this, since it's obvious....
Merge these 2 lines together.
Life Orb Attacker
The bolded is unnecessary.
This is a line that would fit in OO, not Set Details....
No mention of Spore in the first line? It's one of Breloom's defining traits and an ever-present threat (even if its nowhere near as good...
I was thinking more along the lines of
"Hydreigon is a frighteningly powerful Special Attacker with an abusable STAB moves in the form of Dark...
This is a little fat.
I don't see how you couldn't just merge these 2 lines together.
Choice Band absolutely needs a set....
This line should be more descriptive. Mention its attacking stats, powerful STAB and coverage moves as well.
Be sure to list examples...
Azumarill strikes me more of a fearsome sweeper than a wallbreaker due to its primary set centering around Belly Drum. You should reword it to...
I'm not sure how much of an effective lure Togekiss vs Toxapex. I imagine most players will pivot into better checks when the...
I'd merge these two lines together.
Pokemon that can pivot into its checks would work. Volt Switch & U-turn users are also...
3/3 for real this time.
Good work, and my apologies for the confusion.