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  1. Monferno (UU Analysis)

    placeholder reserved for GP check. EDIT: I'm really sorry, but I just don't have time to check this right now. Ignore this placeholder.
  2. Houndoom (Update)

    Grammar-Prose Check 2/2: additions in bold removals in red comments in green Hi whistle, great analysis. Most of my edits, give or take a few, were dealing with prose. You have a tendency to overuse means, so I replaced some mentions of said word. Apart from that, there was only one recurring...
  3. Drifblim (UU Lead)

    Grammar-Prose Check 1/2: additions in bold removals in red comments in green Nice analysis. Looks like an interesting set, I'll have to try it out. Anyway, this was relatively well-written, but I found a few recurring issues I'd like to address below. I also omitted some unnecessary words and...
  4. Sceptile (Life Orb Sweeper)

    I disagree with two changes here: A semicolon is only needed if it's separating two entire sentences. "while Hidden Power Ice..." is not a complete sentence, meaning that a comma is correct here. This change is actually incorrect; a is the correct indefinite article here, not an. One-dimensional...
  5. Scepticallifragilisticexpialidocious

    Rated this thread five stars. I really like your unique art style, it's a lot more simple than some of the other artists in Smeargle's Studio, but still awesome. I love the Nidoking band and the creepy Happiny. I'd like to make a request: can you draw Gible and Kibago smiling/looking happy...
  6. Sceptile (Life Orb Sweeper)

    Grammar-Prose Check 1/2: additions in bold removals in red comments in green Before my "critique", I'll say that I was a bit more harsh on this analysis because I wrote the one on-site. Nice set, Heysup. I changed the gender references to "he" in order to keep it consistent with the...
  7. congrats on your ladybug!

    congrats on your ladybug!
  8. Slowbro (Update)

    Just a note, the minimum number of GP checks is 2, not 3 (whistle lied). Unless Eo thinks this needs another check, it should be ready for uploading.
  9. Mixquaza (Leadquaza Edit)

    Grammar-Prose Check 2/2: additions in bold removals in red comments in green Nice analysis, I made it a bit more concise and cleaned it up overall. After my edits are implemented, I'll stamp this and you can PM a mod to have this uploaded. Nice job!
  10. Toxicroak (Analysis)

    Grammar-Prose Check 2/2: additions in bold removals in red comments in green Nice analysis R_D, vast majority of my edits were prose-related, with one or two gender reference issues. I cut out some unnecessary words and phrases, and made it a bit more concise. Aside from that, however, this...
  11. Ice Arceus (Analysis)

    Brief sweep of the new paragraph, made it flow better as well as catching three or four errors that calentaros missed. This can be considered part of my previous GP check.
  12. Torterra (Specially Defensive)

    Grammar-Prose Check 1/2: additions in bold removals in red comments in green I checked this a while ago but forgot to post it, so here it is. And, Torterra needs some love. This was a pretty good analysis, and most of my edits were prose-related. There were, however, a few issues: 1) It's EVs...
  13. Capture Mechanics (In-Depth)

    Grammar-Prose Check 2/2: additions in bold removals in red comments in green Sorry for the delay in getting this check up. For the most part, I thought this was a very well-written analysis. The only problems I had with it were: 1) at times, it seemed too wordy and verbose. When dealing with...
  14. Water Arceus (analysis)

    Grammar-Prose Check 2/2: additions in bold removals in red comments in green Nice analysis, firecape, you're improving! ;) I strongly believe that Arceus's > Arceus'. Only use an apostrophe at the end when signifying possession for a plural noun that ends in -s. I also corrected a few misuses...
  15. Arcanine (Physical Life Orb)

    Grammar-Prose Check 2/2: additions in bold removals in red comments in green Nice analysis. The vast majority of my edits were prose-related, with a few being especially prominent: you have a tendency to heavily overuse "however" and "allows," so I replaced some mentions of said words. Apart...
  16. Crawdaunt (Dragon Dance)

    Grammar-Prose Check 1/2: additions in bold removals in red comments in green Don't have time to explain errors like I usually do, I'll edit later if I have the chance. Withholding stamp until changes are implemented. EDIT: Changes made, so
  17. A Guide to Ubers Battling (Update)- DONE

    THIS IS AN IMPORTANT POST Well, my impending GP check, which I reserved on the queue, is somewhat obsolete now, so I'll just stick to HTMLization. I've HTMLized everything up to (UPDATED) "Commonly Used Non-Uber Pokemon in Ubers," where I stopped. I'll continue as they get grammar checked. I...
  18. Ice Arceus (Analysis)

    Grammar-Prose Check 2/2: additions in bold removals in red comments in green Thus ends the GP phase of the frigid version of the creator. While most of my edits were prose-related, I found one recurring error: you have tendency to misuse "you." For example: Here, the second example is...
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