Dude, it's in the first post -_-
First I want to ask why Frisk is the primary ability on the Scarf set? Frisk works best with Trick, which is secondary, and Scarf reaaaaaally hates Paralysis. (on a formatting note, abilities aren't slashed, are they? I thought it was left blank and discussed in the comments if the decision mattered). Is there a specific reason Jolly is even an option? Sure it gives more speed, but it's really negligible with a Scarf, sacrificing power without cause. I think it should go unspoken and left off.
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Dugtrio can outrun and trap every Kitsunoh set except Scarf (which is still susceptible to Scarf Dugtrio), and easily OHKO with Earthquake
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Standard Scarf Dugtrio is beat by one point, even by Adamant Kitsunoh. May want to work that in there somehow.
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Lead Kitsunoh, however, almost always carry Trick. Having something reliable to take Trick is important when dealing with the Lead set
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"What lead set?" There isn't a specific one that this is referring too.
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However, an alternate EV spread of 252 HP, 16 Attack, 100 Speed, 140 SpD with a Careful nature can be useful on the Sub + Status set. Most Defensive Latias are unable to break its subs with Surf while you easily 2HKO them with Shadow Strike, assuming no Defense drops.
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Is the bold really needed? When "assuming defense drops," you get the same result.
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name: Life Orb Attacker
move 1: ShadowStrike
move 2: Ice Punch
move 3: U-Turn
move 4: Superpower / Earthquake
item: Leftovers
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This was mentioned earlier.
I also noticed this grammar error:
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With 110 Speed, Kitsunoh outpaces much of the metagame and is more than capable of forcing them into submission Furthermore, it is not a glass cannon like many of its fast brethren like Gengar and Azelf and is very capable of taking a hit when it has to.
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Needs a period after submission.
EDIT2: The original post was editted yesterday. Why would it be editted if not to make changes?