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Originally Posted by Fat Life Orb + 3 Attacks

Cyclohm's bulk, Speed, and type coverage work well together on this set. The 212 EVs invested in HP allow Cyclohm to reach an HP stat of 407, an excellent number for Life Orb since the recoil damage is rounded down, as well as allowing Cyclohm to better take various hits. On the other hand, the 252 Speed EVs allow Cyclohm to outspeed Adamant Lucario, and let Cyclohm speed tie with max Speed Mamoswine. The rest of the EVs go into Special Attack, which, though not receiving the heavy investment given to HP and Speed, is still enough to deal plenty of damage. Draco Meteor, Thunderbolt, and Hydro Pump provide Cyclohm with excellent neutral coverage, allowing Cyclohm to keep itself healthy by packing Slack Off as well.

Originally Posted by Fat SpecsOhm

Hydro Pump quickly demolishes various Ground and Fire types, and, with Cyclohm's strength backing it, can 2HKO even Specially Defensive Tyranitar with Stealth Rock up; Surf is also a workable Water move, if accuracy is preferred.

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Originally Posted by Fat Bulklohm

What Cyclohm lacks in physical resistances, it manages to compensate for with a strong defense and enough offensive muscle to make the retaliation hurt.

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Using Discharge in combination with Static can result in paralyzing your opponent fairly often; this can be useful when used with hard hitters such as Mamoswine or Metagoss, which frequently suffer from their lack of Speed. Additionally, Cyclohm can quickly wear down opposing Pokemon with its attacks, making it easier for the hard hitters to sweep.

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Originally Posted by Fat Opinion

Cyclohm is definitely a hard hitter in today's metagame. With most of its offensive options able to put a dent in the majority of OU, it is indeed a force to be reckoned with. Boasting a wide movepool of hard hitting moves such as Draco Meteor and Hydro Pump, Cyclohm manages to make its switch-ins think twice before coming in on it. Even Steel-types must be wary of an attack coming their way.

Omit "being" between "options" and "able."

Just some small grammar issues. Keep up the good work.