This is a really great job guys, and I only have a few nitpicks. Feel free to disregard them though since I really don't do analyses ever and probably am wrong on a lot of this !_!
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Jirachi cannot rely on Zen Headbutt or Iron Head to flinch Cyclohm due to Cyclohm's ability, Shield Dust, which prevents any secondary effects such as Flamethrower's 10% burn chance or Iron Head's 30% flinch chance.
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Is this really necessary? I feel as if just leaving the explanation out would be best.
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Originally Posted by Fat Choice Specs
[...] a Specsmence Draco Meteor.
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Should be SpecsMence (maybe ?_?)
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Originally Posted by Fat Team Options
Bronzong is the best choice to fill such a roll due to its high defenses and resistance or immunity to all of Cyclohm's weaknesses: Ground, Ice, and Dragon. Bronzong is able to handle Dragon Dance Tyranitar, one Pokemon which Cyclohm has extreme trouble with, with STAB Gyro Ball with boosted power due to Tyranitar's increased Speed.
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The areas I bolded just sounded wierd in my head, though they are probably correct anyways. The second one could be "...with, thanks to.."
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Originally Posted by Fat Team Options
Bronzong also makes an excellent counter to Flygon, which are normally scarfed and therefore take increased damage from Gyro Ball, and Mamoswine, two Pokemon that threaten Cyclohm immensely.
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Possibly put the "which are normally scarfed [...]" in parenthesis, or maybe right, "as well as Mamoswine. Both of these pokemon threaten Cychlom immensely." I just don't like how it flows currently, though my suggestion isn't much better either... >_>
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Originally Posted by Fat Team Options
Bulky Steel types such as Jirachi, [...]
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Should be Bulky Steel-types (right?)
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Originally Posted by Fat Team Options
Machamp can take out Blissey and Tyranitar with DynamicPunch and Latias with Payback after switchin in using its high HP, Special Defense, and resistances to Rock and Dark.
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should be switching
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Originally Posted by Fat Opinion
Even Pokemon that resist Draco Meteor, such as Scizor, who takes upwards of 64% from Specs Draco Meteor, will take a huge chunk of damage.</p>
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awkward phrasing...
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Originally Posted by Fat Opinion
Shield Dust and Slack Off only further Cyclohm's ability to take hits from the likes of Jirachi, a Pokemon that relies on flinch from Iron Head or Zen Headbutt to make a mark on the opponent, Metagross, and Scizor.
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Perhaps put the part about how Jirachi relies on flinchax in parenthesis for an easier read.