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Old Sep 30th, 2009, 5:36:19 PM   #5
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your opponent is guaranteed to be affected by either or both of them
Second paragraph of the entry hazards supporter set, added by
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With it, Fidgit can remove of any entry hazards set up by your opponent
Third paragraph of the same set, should take the of out
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making your team in general more healthier
Same paragraph (right after the last one in fact), should just be healthier
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and it’s chance to drop the opponent’s Special Defense
Still same paragraph, get rid of the apostrophe
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Besides supporting Fidgit with Wish, Fidgit can support its team
Last paragraph for that set, not sure what you meant here
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Fidgit’s ability to set up multiple entry hazards
Same paragraph, forgot the s
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It’s amazing defensive typing gives it many opportunities
First paragraph of the dual screen set, get rid of the apostrophe
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but it’s teammates enjoy the support Fidgit provides for them
Third paragraph of the team options, that apostrophe shouldn't be there
That's all I found, also I agree that Jolly Nature should at least be mentioned for the dual screen set. Good job, as always
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