Originally Posted by Fat whistle
ok that was a nice read. i liked the detail in your comments as they show (a) you know what you're doing (b) you put effort into the warstory. only thing was that i'm a little confused as to how you predicted he wouldn't pursuit just by listing every possible outcome. a bit of a shame that he had somewhat of a lo starmie weak and yours didn't do anything though, heh
About LO Starmie weakness, I just realized it later, pardon. And about Pursuit, it was because I thought it would've been the less-advantageous option: in case of switch, U-Turn would've been great, and he wouldn't have been locked into a dark move being a set-up fodder. Thank you :)
@All: I'd like to know if you like the format, cause I'll surely write other stories in the future :)
Thank you everyone!