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Old Dec 2nd, 2010, 5:22:37 PM   #28
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I really liked it. The commentary is what sets this apart from all the others, and you played well. The not-so-obvious, slow turnaround was also great, and created some suspense (without having to make the readers scroll through a sea of blankness). The Nattorei vs. Gyarados conflict was also amusing.
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