Ahright, yeah, I'd not seen the bit about it being for a game. I still think that you could possibly change the colour scheme, it just looks abit unatural atm. The shadowing on the right (as we look at it) wing is great. for the other shading that you do, experiment with dithering to give it a more polished look. Otherwise, like I said before, great work :)
Insomniac: "Under further deliberation, I'm fine with the new art. My dad works at Nintendo and he told me you guys were going to get sued for Intellectual Property Theft."