Are you aiming towards a Roopushin Sweep? Are you planning to post a threat list or anything along those lines? Most importantly, what is the overall goal of the team? I don't know about anyone else but I lurked most of the way through Gen iv and there have been some seriously glaring omissions and lack lustre attempts since then.
I'd actually say that this shows a better understanding than alot of the teams I've seen recently with the combo of Dragonite and Magnezone backed up with some sturdy 'mons and annoyers. The real issue I see is that your team is beaten by most offensive teams and stall alike. You need Taunt and something mixed. I will give a good rate if you can elaborate on the direction a little.
Apologies about the rant.
"I was both distrubed and browsed by your lack roids."