Thanks for nitpicks :P. I think I've pretty much covered that vaguely in the Tales section, but I'll see if I can highlight her lack of offensive options a tad more.
I'll have a go at grouping up the threats, glad it isn't just me who thins that'd be a good idea! And will edit that into the Cloyster section I added, I alluded to him being a Dragon counter a bit but not enough. Excadrill I think I'll give a miss since Donphan is better at doing his job defensively, and the nasty weaknesses he adds don't generally help sun teams.
Thanks again for the rates, really helpful!