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Benny in a Jet · Jul 9th, 2011, 5:44:40 PM

I really enjoyed this warstory. Your superb use of Shedninja was nice at the end, although the misplays by Sharpedo (and to a lesser extent Toarkoal and Venomoth) were disheartening at the beginning, but it got better on the second post. I really believe Miltank should be your MVP to be honest. She killed Wobb and Yanmega, and paralyzed Alomomola and Hariyama.

Anyway, it wasn't the best, but pretty good. ^^ 7/10

PS: Just a little nitpick, but on Turn 38, you would've hit him first anyway due to Whirlwind's negative priority. Although this didn't matter since X-Scissor was resisted anyway.

Jul 9th, 2011, 5:44:40 PM	#17
Benny in a Jet Join Date: Jun 2011 Posts: 238	I really enjoyed this warstory. Your superb use of Shedninja was nice at the end, although the misplays by Sharpedo (and to a lesser extent Toarkoal and Venomoth) were disheartening at the beginning, but it got better on the second post. I really believe Miltank should be your MVP to be honest. She killed Wobb and Yanmega, and paralyzed Alomomola and Hariyama. Anyway, it wasn't the best, but pretty good. ^^ 7/10 PS: Just a little nitpick, but on Turn 38, you would've hit him first anyway due to Whirlwind's negative priority. Although this didn't matter since X-Scissor was resisted anyway. __________________ Chuck Norris once pissed in a semi-trucks gas tank as a joke. That truck is now known as Optimus Prime. † I have accepted Jesus Christ as my personal savior and am proud of it! Copy and paste this if you are too.†