This is like the fourthish Warstory that I have read and they have all been fine. But that is the problem, wait until either you have a mind blowing battle, or until you have great commentary before posting a Warstory. It was fine, and I liked your Theme, although you could have gotten more into it and been more elaborate with it :). Good job all in all 7/10
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[20:35:44] Mekkah: childeren in the backseats cause accidents
[20:35:51] Mekkah: accidents on the backseat cause childeren
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