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Old Sep 23rd, 2011, 4:48:01 PM   #1506
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http://www.smogon.com/bw/articles/bw_gravity

In the "Gravity Users" section, in the analysis for Forretress, the word "get" is repeated, probably as a result of a typo.

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Originally Posted by Fat Generation V Guide to Gravity
This is really useful, as Forretress can set up Gravity then Volt Switch out, using its defensive stats as a shield to get get your next Pokemon in safely, ready to abuse Gravity.
There should be only one "get."

Also, in the same article, in the section "Team Building" and the subsection "Defensive Teams," there is a comma which is not followed by a space.

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Originally Posted by Fat Generation V Guide to Gravity
Hippowdon can use its massive bulk to check the many physical sweepers in BW,such as Excadrill.
There should be a space after the comma after "BW."

In addition, in the same article, in the section "Team Building" and the subsection "Offensive / Balanced Teams," there are two words without a space between them.

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Originally Posted by Fat Generation V Guide to Gravity
Toxic also helps weaken opposing weather inducers such as Ninetales and Politoed, letting youcontrol the weather.
There should be a space between the words "you" and "control."
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