One minor nitpick: Rock Slide should have done 17 damage to both targets. (8 + 3) x 1.5 = 16.6 ~ 17. Aside from that, all looks well.
Hm...Evasion? Let's go ahead and nullify that, shall we?
Salmon: Chill -> Flamethrower
Lumber: Foresight -> Hammer Arm
IF (Lumber is targeted in Snorunt's first attack) AND (The move hits), THEN (Use Drain Punch on the second action)
Ankhles: Drain Punch -> Hammer Arm
[23:49:15] <orcinus> potato potato
[23:49:16] <orcinus> that really
[23:49:23] <orcinus> doesn't have the same effect as when you say it out loud