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Doran Dragon · Dec 8th, 2011, 12:28:01 AM

ok, well I tried writing a pokemon fanfiction...tell me if you like it and stuff?

The Deox Virus

The Deox Virus: Prologue
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"Hello everone,its a beautiful Morning in the lovely month of August." The barely audible droning sound of the VCR provides a fitting ambience for the voices of the speakers on the screen. "Its currently 11:03 am on August 24th, 2009, and we seem to have clear skies above us, isnt that right Janet?" The male speaker turns to the woman at his right. "Its seems so, Jerry. Summers comming to a close, so get out in the sun and heat while you can! When we return from the break, a special news story! A meteor passing by the earth within a few hours!" The screen flashes and quickly flies through the commecials, the VCR's hum becomming louder for only a second. The picture suddenly pauses, and begins working normally again. "Welcome back to GRN, channel 5. Janet, you were saying about a special story?" "Yes! According to local scientists, A large meteor is going to pass earth within an hour! Its going to be close enough to see in broad daylight and scientists predict within a few decades, it may end up hitting earth!" The screen stops on her face, grinning a grin for entertainment.

"Heh, has it really been 3 years already?" A young man sits up from a laying position on a couch. The dark room is illuminated by the Television. The young man stands up and walks over to a window covered by a thick piece of canvas and peeks outside. Overcome by the brightness of the day, the young man covers his eyes while waiting for them to adjust. Finaly, looking out of the window, The young man sees what he feared, that day and every day before, and will fear every day to come. The city was empty. It wasnt that there were a few people out, but the the city had been void of human life for almost 3 years. The meteor wasnt the exact cause for this emptyness, but it was a catalyst to the events that led to the abandoned world. The young man turned away from the window and proceeded with his daily routine, but not before unpausing the VCR.

"We have knews! It seems that the meteor is early, and that peices are dislodging and falling to earth! Jerry, this sounds frightening, but its sure to pass quickly." As Janet finishes her sentance, a news cast member places a new paper on her desk. "...After reading this, it seems that one or more or the meteorites have fallen in town, and we have a reporter on scene recording live. Silvia?" The screen changes to a square in the city. A young woman is standing in front of a gaping hole in the street. "Hello! Im Silvia, and it appears that one of the meteorites have fallen right in the middle of the city! We are going to attempt to get a closer look..." Silvia stammers her last word as a large amethyst colored gemstone rises from the hole, and hovers 5 feet above the ground. "I-I cant b-believe what I'm seeing here. You have this on camera right? Well, a large stone has emerged from the hole, and is simply defying gravity before our eyes!" The stone glows, and matter begins to form around the gem, flesh the color of ripe oranges with accents of ash grey and sky blue. The flesh begins forming the shape of a man, and completes its transormation. The stone lying at it's heart, the creature stands 5' 7" from head to toe, with an arm on the left side, and tenticles shaping a helix on the right, the face is primarily sky blue, with a purple line down the middle and hollow eyes. "I-its become a man! I"m g-going to atempt to get closer, keep the camera on it!" Silvia hesitantly walks forward and the man turns it's head towards her, it's hollow eyes focused on hers. Silvia stops in her tracks when it and her eyes met. The purple line on it's forhead glowing, she turns back to the camera. "I think it's trying to talk to~" The man unleases a cutting flash of energy from the purple line and the screen cuts to black. After a 20 second pause the screen returns to man and woman in the studio. "...umm...It seems that whatever has landed isnt friendly. It it suggested that you stay within whatever building your currently in, that you lock the doors...and that you remain calm. Janet...I believe you were right when you said that this meteor is frightening...We will return at a later time to keep you posted on the status. Jerry, out." "Janet, out."

The screen turns blue. The young man turns the Television off, and turns towards the apartment door. "Jolteon, come. We're leaving now." A large dog sized fox quickly arives at the side of the young man, it's yellow and white fur sparking with a natural electricity produced by the animal. The young man opens the door and the two walk out.
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"Hello, I am Doran Dragon, and I am a survivor. If you're out there...if anyone is out there, come to the radio tower. I will be there at noon each day. I will provide food, water, and shelter. Please..."
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Doran stared at the building. It was where his father worked before his parents went missing. Its the only place in johto that studied the scientific side of animals. When the orange men appeared, Doran's father was made the leading scientist in studying the orange men. What they found out had become confidential, no one, not even the other scientists were allowed to know the information they found. Doran knew that he would need to know as much about the orange men as possible if he is supposed to fight against them and the disease they brought with them.

When the orange men arrived, they brought a disease that spread throughout the region, one that caused humans to turn sickening colors of Orange and blue, and animals to become violent, as if they were somehow turning into the orange men themselves. scientists named the disease Deoxynucleic Fromate, due to the fact that the DNA of the infected changed. Interestingly enough, most of the orange men, now called Deoxys in relation to the virus name, left earth a month after their arival, leaving us to ur own destruction.

Doran steped forward towards the door. He had all the resolve needed to enter the building, but he still hesitated. The dangers inside couldnt hurt him as he was immune to the effects of Deoxynucleic Fromate, but Jolteon was still quite suseptable. Still, Doran knew that he had trained Jolteon to avoid trouble in situations that could end up nasty. Doran steped up to the door and swung it open, raising his clenched fists in anticipation. When the darkness inside failed to stir, Doran stepped inside with jolteon following close behind. "Lets go find the info on the Deoxys that my dad has hidden in here, Jolteon!"

Dec 8th, 2011, 12:28:01 AM	#163
Doran Dragon Join Date: Apr 2010 Posts: 1,158 Isla Nublar; Dinosaurs, fuck yeah!	ok, well I tried writing a pokemon fanfiction...tell me if you like it and stuff? The Deox Virus The Deox Virus: Prologue __________________________________________________ __________ "Hello everone,its a beautiful Morning in the lovely month of August." The barely audible droning sound of the VCR provides a fitting ambience for the voices of the speakers on the screen. "Its currently 11:03 am on August 24th, 2009, and we seem to have clear skies above us, isnt that right Janet?" The male speaker turns to the woman at his right. "Its seems so, Jerry. Summers comming to a close, so get out in the sun and heat while you can! When we return from the break, a special news story! A meteor passing by the earth within a few hours!" The screen flashes and quickly flies through the commecials, the VCR's hum becomming louder for only a second. The picture suddenly pauses, and begins working normally again. "Welcome back to GRN, channel 5. Janet, you were saying about a special story?" "Yes! According to local scientists, A large meteor is going to pass earth within an hour! Its going to be close enough to see in broad daylight and scientists predict within a few decades, it may end up hitting earth!" The screen stops on her face, grinning a grin for entertainment. "Heh, has it really been 3 years already?" A young man sits up from a laying position on a couch. The dark room is illuminated by the Television. The young man stands up and walks over to a window covered by a thick piece of canvas and peeks outside. Overcome by the brightness of the day, the young man covers his eyes while waiting for them to adjust. Finaly, looking out of the window, The young man sees what he feared, that day and every day before, and will fear every day to come. The city was empty. It wasnt that there were a few people out, but the the city had been void of human life for almost 3 years. The meteor wasnt the exact cause for this emptyness, but it was a catalyst to the events that led to the abandoned world. The young man turned away from the window and proceeded with his daily routine, but not before unpausing the VCR. "We have knews! It seems that the meteor is early, and that peices are dislodging and falling to earth! Jerry, this sounds frightening, but its sure to pass quickly." As Janet finishes her sentance, a news cast member places a new paper on her desk. "...After reading this, it seems that one or more or the meteorites have fallen in town, and we have a reporter on scene recording live. Silvia?" The screen changes to a square in the city. A young woman is standing in front of a gaping hole in the street. "Hello! Im Silvia, and it appears that one of the meteorites have fallen right in the middle of the city! We are going to attempt to get a closer look..." Silvia stammers her last word as a large amethyst colored gemstone rises from the hole, and hovers 5 feet above the ground. "I-I cant b-believe what I'm seeing here. You have this on camera right? Well, a large stone has emerged from the hole, and is simply defying gravity before our eyes!" The stone glows, and matter begins to form around the gem, flesh the color of ripe oranges with accents of ash grey and sky blue. The flesh begins forming the shape of a man, and completes its transormation. The stone lying at it's heart, the creature stands 5' 7" from head to toe, with an arm on the left side, and tenticles shaping a helix on the right, the face is primarily sky blue, with a purple line down the middle and hollow eyes. "I-its become a man! I"m g-going to atempt to get closer, keep the camera on it!" Silvia hesitantly walks forward and the man turns it's head towards her, it's hollow eyes focused on hers. Silvia stops in her tracks when it and her eyes met. The purple line on it's forhead glowing, she turns back to the camera. "I think it's trying to talk to~" The man unleases a cutting flash of energy from the purple line and the screen cuts to black. After a 20 second pause the screen returns to man and woman in the studio. "...umm...It seems that whatever has landed isnt friendly. It it suggested that you stay within whatever building your currently in, that you lock the doors...and that you remain calm. Janet...I believe you were right when you said that this meteor is frightening...We will return at a later time to keep you posted on the status. Jerry, out." "Janet, out." The screen turns blue. The young man turns the Television off, and turns towards the apartment door. "Jolteon, come. We're leaving now." A large dog sized fox quickly arives at the side of the young man, it's yellow and white fur sparking with a natural electricity produced by the animal. The young man opens the door and the two walk out. __________________________________________________ __________ "Hello, I am Doran Dragon, and I am a survivor. If you're out there...if anyone is out there, come to the radio tower. I will be there at noon each day. I will provide food, water, and shelter. Please..." __________________________________________________ __________ Doran stared at the building. It was where his father worked before his parents went missing. Its the only place in johto that studied the scientific side of animals. When the orange men appeared, Doran's father was made the leading scientist in studying the orange men. What they found out had become confidential, no one, not even the other scientists were allowed to know the information they found. Doran knew that he would need to know as much about the orange men as possible if he is supposed to fight against them and the disease they brought with them. When the orange men arrived, they brought a disease that spread throughout the region, one that caused humans to turn sickening colors of Orange and blue, and animals to become violent, as if they were somehow turning into the orange men themselves. scientists named the disease Deoxynucleic Fromate, due to the fact that the DNA of the infected changed. Interestingly enough, most of the orange men, now called Deoxys in relation to the virus name, left earth a month after their arival, leaving us to ur own destruction. Doran steped forward towards the door. He had all the resolve needed to enter the building, but he still hesitated. The dangers inside couldnt hurt him as he was immune to the effects of Deoxynucleic Fromate, but Jolteon was still quite suseptable. Still, Doran knew that he had trained Jolteon to avoid trouble in situations that could end up nasty. Doran steped up to the door and swung it open, raising his clenched fists in anticipation. When the darkness inside failed to stir, Doran stepped inside with jolteon following close behind. "Lets go find the info on the Deoxys that my dad has hidden in here, Jolteon!" __________________ Best song ever :) I really love spirit science. Check it out, but keep an open mind. Jurassic LoL: "Clever Champ..."