typon, you're still missing Base Rank Total for your Pokemon. You can find it in the Stat and Rarity Listing of the Data Audit thread. Also, since Magnemite has no Egg moves, you are allowed to take 3 extra tutor moves from any generation instead, so you should add those in. Fix these and you are APPROVED. Welcome to ASB!
Maxie, you have a few problems:
-Your Pokemon need sprites. Find a sprite, right-click it and select Copy Image Location, then paste it between [img][/img] tags. Also, I have no idea what that Bulbapedia link is there for on Shellder.
-Your Pokemon also need STAB summaries. These can be found in the Data Audit thread in the Type Description List. Incidentally, Shellder is not Water/Ice, but pure Water.
-Overcoat and Speed Boost should be marked as Dream World abilities by putting Overcoat (DW) or something similar. Also, Overcoat has recently changed, so you should get the new description from the Data Audit thread Ability List.
-Your Speed stats should indicate that they have been boosted by your nature. Put (40*1.15^) for Shellder beside the Speed stat and (45*1.15^) for Torchic.
-You need Size Class, Weight Class, and Base Rank Total, as well as move counts. The first three can be found in the Data Audit thread in the Stat and Rarity list, while you'll have to count the moves yourself for the move count.
-You need to list the accuracy boost for your Pokemon that results from taking a +Speed nature. The boost is your new speed squared, divided by a divisor depending on what evolution level your Pokemon is. In Shellder's case (first of two), it's 435, and in Torchic's case (first out of three), it's 290.
-Shellder can add Aurora Beam to its level-up movepool, it gets it at level 17 in one of the older generations
Apparently you're not actually done yet, but for the time being NOT APPROVED.