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Old Jan 25th, 2012, 12:03:13 AM   #2371
Jimera0
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Hello everyone, and welcome to my post where I'll be updating my progress throughout my Pokemon Black Scramble! Before we get to the meat of the journey, here's what I received from you guys:

The Team!


So, that being said, here's the first chapter! Each chapter from here-in will be added here and I'll notify you guys in a separate post, much like Jimera does. Hope you enjoy!

Note: I must admit, my ambition in life is to become an author. Hence, I've done quite a bit of pre-planning. The way I write this, the story will be divided into five parts: Parts One, Two, and Three; the Endgame; then the Postgame. Just a heads-up. It makes me smile, I guess, so just roll with my need for arbitrary planning.

Part One: Prelude to Discord / Segment One: Beyond Our Gates (Nuvema Town, Route 1, Accumula Town)


That's it so far! I'm hoping to update this every two-three days, but don't hold me to a strict schedule. Also, because the humor that I so wanted to include in this didn't really portray well in story form, here's the (rather humorous) notes that I typed up while playing so that I kept up with what I wanted to write.

Part One / Segment One Notes (The Funny Version, Basically)


P.S. this took me about four hours to put together. I'd love feedback, please! <3
Damn, you put a lot of effort into that. You've got some writing skills I can see. I tried to do a similar thing with a Sapphire Nuzlocke I abandoned but I just couldn't manage it, went back to my commentary style afterward. I like the two version thing, the notes are more traditional for this thread while the first bit reads like a fanfic. Keep it up!

And since I'm sure people are wondering where my update is, I'll get it up in a few days, don't you all worry :P. I had a friend on tonight I haven't talked to for a bit so I ended up not doing the scramble as planned. Be patient!
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