Chapter 2's going up now. It's almost twice as long as the first. If there are any inconsistencies in the writing, let me know, and I'll try to fix them. I have a basic idea of where I want to take this story, so everything's not supposed to make sense yet.
Comments on the new chapter?
EDIT: If anyone wants the actual battle log against Brock, I have it available. End-of-Chapter summary is coming soon.