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Old Feb 3rd, 2012, 8:26:16 PM   #2466
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Originally Posted by Fat user 18 View Post
First things first. Jimera and KS, great updates.

Jimera, my vision for the museum was that it was like the Smithsonian, in that it was not only a museum, but a research centre and a point of display for the results of research by them and others. What would you recommend I change to make this clearer? Without giving too much away, I can say that this interpretation is important in the next update, so if you or anyone else has suggestions of a point to make during chapter 2, that would be very much appreciated.
Well if it's a research center, then show the staff doing some researching! If you were to show that they were also researching stuff (pokemon in particular, otherwise the type chart will still look out of place) then it would establish what goes on in the museum without having to tell people directly.

Anyway, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter, sounds like you have some interesting ideas!
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