May 20th, 2012, 3:57:24 PM
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Join Date: Dec 2011
Posts: 354
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Darn you, expiring tokens, I have to type this twice. X.x
Embiggened the shell for the three people who suggested it. I was thinking fat and skinny shells as gender differences.
Comments:
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- Ice-cold Claws: Is the lamp better in smoothness now? If not, which parts need to be smoothed out?
- GreenWailord: Well, the lamp could do with a slight desaturation. It looks like pure yellow and pure pink in there. Also, there's that crook at the bottom of the next you also have to smooth out. If you're struggling to make the sprite smooth, how about larger dimensions?
- aragornbird: The actual snail is wonderful. :) The cone on the back, though, looks too far back--the vestibule (and its shading) between the body and the lamp's opening makes it look stretched and... I don't know. Something. I do think the sprite, overall, is a bit large. It could be intentional, sure, as we don't know its size, if you'd rather not change that.
- DougJustDoug: I love the curliness and rubberiness of the snail, Doug. The insides of the lap, though, are quite bright and contrast greatly with the more neutral tones of the snail. A slight adjustment of saturation should do. Additionally, that white reflection on the glass part of the lamp is oddly placed, as it would indicate a light source directly left of the snail. It does not have to be on the edge to constitute a highlight.
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