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Old May 30th, 2012, 5:32:38 PM   #19
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Overview
  • Not nearly enough mention of various difficulties faced in Dream World, including but not limited to Shadow Tag Choice Scard Chandelure (i.e. Gliscor's worst nightmare if it gets in safely), Keldeo, Genesect, Thundurus, etc., etc.
Swords Dance Gliscor
  • There should be a space between [SET COMMENTS] and the following paragraph, [ADDITIONAL COMMENTS] and the following paragraph, etc.
  • Move order goes by order of importance; for the Swords Dance set it should be move 1: Swords Dance | move 2: Earthquake | move 3: Ice Fang / Facade | move 4: Protect
  • Don't mention Regice. Nobody uses it.
  • ...No mention of Tyranitar? Fix this.
  • You need more explanation of teammates and how they benefit Gliscor, and how Gliscor benefits them.
  • Aerial Ace in AC for an OHKO on Breloom.
  • Partners that can take Ice-type attacks.
SubToxic Gliscor
  • Order should be move 1: Toxic | move 2: Substitute | move 3: Earthquake | move 4: Protect / Ice Fang
  • Toxic Spikes support
  • Tyranitar support
  • Partners that can take Ice-type attacks.
  • Specially Defensive is not worth an AC mention. Move it to Other Options
  • Mention that Skarmory commonly carries Shed Shell, making the efforts of Chandelure and Magnezone useless.
Acrobat Gliscor
  • Why are you leading the discussion with Sand Veil when the whole point of this set is Acrobatics?
  • Moveset order should be move 1: Acrobatics | move 2: Earthquake | move 3: Swords Dance | move 4: Substitute
Other Options
  • This has way too little content.
Checks and Counters
  • Rotom-W
I'm not going to sugarcoat it, I am not at all happy with the quality here. Alongside content problems, the grammar and prose are poor. This is not approved yet. I'll give you some time to work on improving this on your own after implementing all this, but I want to see some serious improvement.
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