Excellent work so far, especially for your first analysis.
I'll leave the Baton Pass mention completely up to you--either AC or a slash seems fine to me. I do need you to explain the EV and nature choices a little more in detail at the beginning of the AC sections for both sets. Should be easy for you since I was there when you talked about it on IRC.
Once that's done, consider this stamped.
Quality Control Approved 1/3
Last edited by kokoloko; Jun 7th, 2012 at 11:45:39 AM.
Reason: typo bugged me