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Old Jun 14th, 2012, 3:38:23 AM   #27
Chou Toshio
Hmmm... A name for the plan...
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"Due to this," is still such a gross way to start a sentence... Please don't do that... At least use "This allows Heracross..." or "This gives Heracross..." or "This makes Heracross..."

active/dynamic writing = good writing.
passive voice = ewww...
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