superimp you've been doing a lot of good work for ubers qc and it would probably help you a lot if you came on irc
i'm actually in favour of all competitive overviews but i realize that flavour holds a lot of nostalgic and entertainment (although i question the presence of the latter) value with quite a few users
with that being said I do think flying arceus' overview does go into too much detail, it basically has a flying-type mini analysis. concision is key and a lot of what you have said can be reworded in a more succinct and readable fashion.
i'm reaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaally more willing to help out with a lot of things on irc as opposed to the forums and i'm sure at least some people feel that way too.
you can save yourself a lot of time just by running sentences, overviews, changes, movesets, ev spreads through people in #ubers